Lawyer

Licensed to right the wrong Look past loopholes of lies Lure rivals to confess Listen to untold facts Lend voice for the silent Language, their pearl armor Lawful knights, dressed in black

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/12/2023 6:54:00 AM

Very complimentary to lawyers. Kinda made me chuckle.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2023 2:55:00 AM

Creative way to go with this winner. Congratulations on your work being on the winners' list. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/21/2023 5:04:00 AM

Look past loopholes of lies… Lawful knights, dressed in black…Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2023 4:08:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest :) -

Terry Miller

Date: 9/20/2023 3:03:00 AM

Excellent!

Ink Empress

Date: 9/19/2023 11:15:00 PM

Hello papi back to congratulate u again! So now you are officially my lawyer! ?? with pearl armor! No running away from work! Stay focused hahah m so happy u won! Keep shining

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/20/2023 12:11:00 AM

Awwwwn thank u papi … yea yea yeaaaas I worked sooo hard for this piece aeee … so happy to be chosen

Joseph May

Date: 9/19/2023 5:42:00 PM

Very nicely done Lioness, Congrats on your win

Tom Woody

Date: 9/17/2023 2:09:00 PM

Legal lizards lying for lucre. But hey, what do I know? Good stuff lioness. Roar

Michelle Morris

Date: 9/17/2023 6:06:00 AM

An enjoyable poem that lays out the description of lawyers very well. Blessings. :-)

Silent One

Date: 9/17/2023 4:35:00 AM

You did the topic really well and covered the description of a lawyer very well.. nice use of the L....

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/17/2023 5:50:00 AM

Thank you brothaaa .. I put a lot of thought into it !!! L was tough XD

Ink Empress

Date: 9/17/2023 2:59:00 AM

Papi where is my lawyer!! Haha wow what a knight dressed in black huh, i wrote also for lawyer n ddn post but yours is brilliant! I love the flow and also how you’ve written “ language their pearl armor” ooooh so good papi! You’ve nailed it i cant wait to see you win! Congratulations in advance

Ink Empress
Date: 9/17/2023 5:58:00 AM

Lolol i bet u can be my lawyer

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/17/2023 5:52:00 AM

Yes yesss papi … I very much enjoyed flowing this piece .. it just popped up out of nowhere … XD … I guess lawyers r like that aeee… dnt worry ur lawyer will also pop up out of nowhere … hahahhaha