Lavender Sunset, Visual 6

Sunset
casts lavender 
hues across lustrous sea,
then brushes clouds as bustling day
falls still.

colorpeaceskycinquain

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Skat A

Date: 2/1/2015 2:32:00 PM

RHONDA, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT

David Mohn

Date: 1/28/2015 10:00:00 PM

Beauitfully written...big congrats Rhonda

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 1/28/2015 1:20:00 PM

Brilliant sunset reflecting shades of radiant purple! Congratulations on painting a winning masterpiece, Rhonda! This is only another reason why you are on my list of favorite poets! Warmest regards. Pandita

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2015 3:46:00 PM

!!! : > )...Way to go..Sara

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/26/2015 10:12:00 AM

Congrats Rhonda. God bless.>rajat

Arlene Smith

Date: 1/25/2015 7:35:00 PM

Congrats on a beautiful win, dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

Joseph May

Date: 1/25/2015 3:56:00 PM

Congrats on a great win Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2015 3:39:00 PM

Love this picture and love how you painted it with words. congrats for your win in my contest. I had almost put this one in top three, rhonda. I just didn't like the word "hues" being separated from lavender! All the words together are simply splendid.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/25/2015 5:00:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea...I'm happy with my placement. You had some terrific entries. Yes, now that you mention it, I could have placed hues together with lavender then had casts on the next line... live and learn... hugs, Rhonda