Lavender Song

How was I to know it would be so beautiful.? Hypnotic and it did hypnotize. Exotic and pure tranquility Such a deliciousness to the senses. My lips yearned for this melody. I let it glide up from the depth of my being. It escaped my lips and instantly it began to Hypnotize the entire globe. My humanness betrayed me. I cried out. Transfixed by its beauty a smile lightened me. I floated away on the LAVENDER wings of a butterfly.

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Cynthia Jones

Date: 1/9/2015 9:18:00 AM

Val, this write is fantastic. Beautifully penned. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Cynthia Jones
Date: 1/10/2015 7:17:00 AM

:O) You are most welcome Val. Every poem deserves a chance to be read. *S* Cynthia

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 1/9/2015 1:10:00 PM

Thanks. Cynthia YOUR administration overwhelms me. LAVENDER SONG WAS MY FIRST POEM. THANKS A MILLION TIMES CYNTHIA.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 12/30/2014 1:46:00 PM

I like the way your words flow. Welcome to Poetry Soup :)

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 12/30/2014 8:59:00 PM

Thank you For your admiration Debbie. I'll look you up in the future.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/8/2014 7:31:00 AM

flowing really very beautifully crafted piece valrie

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 12/8/2014 3:12:00 PM

Thank you for your critique, Liam. I'm going look for your poems now

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/7/2014 7:27:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Valerie - I choose your first lovely and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 12/7/2014 8:39:00 AM

Thank you. A thousand times. I'm looking forward to being involved with Soup family and to reading lots of poems.