Lavender Song

How was I to know it would be so beautiful.?
Hypnotic and it did hypnotize.
Exotic and pure tranquility
Such a deliciousness to the senses.

My lips yearned for this melody.
I let it glide up from the depth of my being.
It escaped my lips and instantly it began to 
Hypnotize the entire globe.
My humanness betrayed me. I cried out.
Transfixed by its beauty a smile lightened me.
I floated away on the LAVENDER wings of a butterfly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Jones Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 9:18 AM
Val, this write is fantastic. Beautifully penned. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
Jones Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 7:17 AM
:O) You are most welcome Val. Every poem deserves a chance to be read. *S* Cynthia
Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 1:10 PM
Thanks. Cynthia YOUR administration overwhelms me. LAVENDER SONG WAS MY FIRST POEM. THANKS A MILLION TIMES CYNTHIA.
Duncan Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 1:46 PM
I like the way your words flow. Welcome to Poetry Soup :)
Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 8:59 PM
Thank you For your admiration Debbie. I'll look you up in the future.
Mcdaid Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 7:31 AM
flowing really very beautifully crafted piece valrie
Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 3:12 PM
Thank you for your critique, Liam. I'm going look for your poems now
Andresen Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 7:27 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Valerie - I choose your first lovely and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 8:39 AM
Thank you. A thousand times. I'm looking forward to being involved with Soup family and to reading lots of poems.
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