Laveaha

Laveaha was a beautiful mermaid,
who lived underneath the real deep sea.
She was a princess who longed to be free, 
finding her one true love was what she prayed.

Zueselist, king controlled her every move,
he wanted the best for his little girl.
She aimed to live life and give it a whirl.
Laveaha felt that she had much to prove.

 At night she would swim to the ocean's shore,
once she reached land, she was able to walk,
Laveaha ran and used her voice to talk.
being above the ocean wasn't a bore.

One night her eyes laid on a handsome man,
she didn't want to return her ocean home.
She found true love and heart wouldn't roam,
He was her soulmate, perfect gentleman.

    Laveaha left her crown and her power,
 they married and became husband and wife.
 She never looked back, just embraced her life,
     although long ago, she visits the hour.



The rhyme scheme "abba" (that is, where the first and fourth lines, and the second and third lines rhyme).

Inspired By The Enclosed Rhyme Contest
Sponsor: Emile Pinet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 3:37 PM
With this last comment, I am caught up. now to go home and exercise!!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 3:36 PM
gosh, i was thinking it was your fairy tale poem and then got to the end and saw it was enclosed rhyme practice. it reminds me of that famous fairy tale about the mermaid but I think in that story , she does not get her prince. I prefer your way, that she DOES.
Mhangwa Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 6:26 AM
Very well done, the poem is filled with so much emotion!
Krutsinger Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 5:02 PM
Nicely written, and not easy to do. I have tried an enclosed line poem, and they are painful to me, but yours flows so smoothly. Good luck in Emile's contest, my friend!
Y. Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 5:22 PM
Hi Caren, Thank you so much. I will go to your page and read some of your enclosed rhymes. I appreciate your support:-) Alexis
May Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 4:12 PM
Well done Alexis very good my friend!
Y. Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 5:23 PM
Hi Bobby, I'm glad you liked it my friend. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis
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