Get Your Premium Membership

Lava Love

oh my oh my
my soul is on fire
what shall i do
when i am drowning in desire
i see your lips so full and lush
i imagine your stature so masculine
but not rough
when i see you oh my
my knees become wax
and i melt i melt
into a puddle of lava
i'm on fire burning and longing
for your very touch
just an embrace
is enough to send me to dust
but no you'll never know how i feel
i am too shy
but love you forever i will

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/17/2013 6:44:00 PM
Great read, I can sympathize with such longing that isn't returned.
Login to Reply
Mitchell Avatar
April Mitchell
Date: 4/24/2013 5:14:00 PM
Well thank you for the review!
Date: 2/1/2013 12:10:00 AM
Hi April, Way to go! I love your writing style - staight and smooth. The rhythm and beat in your words makes the poem a pleasure to read. Well done.I’ll be sure to look out to more from you. Vicky.
Login to Reply
Mitchell Avatar
April Mitchell
Date: 2/2/2013 10:55:00 AM
thank you so much and i am also on writers network poetry soup allpoetry and powerpoetry!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things