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Lava Love

oh my oh my my soul is on fire what shall i do when i am drowning in desire i see your lips so full and lush i imagine your stature so masculine but not rough when i see you oh my my knees become wax and i melt i melt into a puddle of lava i'm on fire burning and longing for your very touch just an embrace is enough to send me to dust but no you'll never know how i feel i am too shy but love you forever i will

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Date: 4/17/2013 6:44:00 PM
Great read, I can sympathize with such longing that isn't returned.
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April Mitchell
Date: 4/24/2013 5:14:00 PM
Well thank you for the review!
Date: 2/1/2013 12:10:00 AM
Hi April, Way to go! I love your writing style - staight and smooth. The rhythm and beat in your words makes the poem a pleasure to read. Well done.I’ll be sure to look out to more from you. Vicky.
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April Mitchell
Date: 2/2/2013 10:55:00 AM
thank you so much and i am also on writers network poetry soup allpoetry and powerpoetry!

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