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Lauren

Lusting for her attention my love will not astray Lasciviously longing for her touch I am Left as a lonesome lover Longing for this looming emotion to be repaid Attentively awaiting her response as I Adore her angelic prowess Absorbing her passionate beauty Allured with her benevolent touch I Admire her decadent love from a distance Ultimately aflame from her radiance Unveiling this starry-eyed emotion Unswerving this feeling that I longed to revive Unusually risking the despair in hopes of Undeniably finding her there Riveting as the morning sun, her beauty is Resonating through my veins like a drug Rendering the urge to satisfy my desire Enthralled in her glittering ambiance Elated by her smile, I cannot Escape this everlasting trial Nevertheless will she notice my devotion Nervously wishing to numb my emotion, to Nimbly evade this narcotic notion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/6/2015 5:54:00 PM
Impressive use of acrostic as well. I've never used this form, my attempts looked too forced, but yours read like they were written so effortlessly, very smooth feel and flow. Some passionate poet and lover, you are, Michael. 7. Smiles for a great weekend. :) Kim
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Date: 3/1/2015 5:03:00 PM
wow what amazing alliteration - she sure sounds stunning :-) Hugs jan xx
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Michael Cannizzaro
Date: 3/3/2015 1:49:00 PM
Thanks!

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