Laurels Apexes

In an innate world, the brain is beautiful.
Being two percent of the body mass, the brain requires about twenty 
     percent of its oxygen and calories.
The most beautiful image ever seen is the brain normal functions.
So when you are at your wits end, remember that sound understanding is a   
     beautiful place to be.
Your brain is majesty.
I know this because of the abnormality that can manifest when you do not use  
     common sense.
This takes away from intellectual power.
You are therefore, diffused.
     The mind is encompassed.
Supreme exquisiteness that boons the utmost splendor is the brain.
Use it wisely.

     The superficial element of the brain is like imagery seen.
Information is process to enhance memory.
Through telepathic means, your senses thrive.
     Manifestations of colorful or colorless montage are visualize.
Let your mind take control.
Live your life as bursts of insight to attain positivity while acquiring the   
     guidance needed.
All know the story of the dead brain.
The woman revived it with a base of knowledge.
     She stemmed it via the occipital lobe.
Then she found it a body to raise above.
The brain begins to function normally.
     The human was magnificent to see.
What are the metaphors?
A brain is nothing but a scheme.
     The schematic brain is allegory.

The brain encompasses the mind.
The mind forms symbolism.
     This is where your reality becomes your thinking.
Your clown frown is on.
Your mouth hangs open.
     You are a click of hyperactivity.
You win arguments but you lose disagreements.
Your vicissitudes are with your anticyclones and nadirs.
     You know that the world is in a depressive state.
Foster good will to cultivate empowerment.
Therefore, bringing forth the most beautiful image of all normal 
     preoccupations of the brain.
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PENNED ON JULY 02, 2014!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 29, 2014 at 6:25 PM
Verlena, Congratulations, enjoyed your free verse poem..Linda
Walker  Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 6:44 PM
Thanks Linda.
Arowolo Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 11:54 PM
Very educative and intriguing piece,Verlera...Congrats on your win...
Walker  Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 4:52 PM
Thanks Olusegun... Verlena
Lawless Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 12:29 PM
Verlena, a very complex endeavor, this poem. Congrats on your placement in the contest
Walker  Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 2:21 PM
Thanks John for your supportive remarks. I wrote this philosophically; therefore, it was done with a complexity... Hugs Verlena
Onclaud Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 1:29 AM
it is said that we lose more weight from brian -use than body- moves... nonetheless, i like how you took your theme and made it so inviting.. congrats and huggs, verlena..
Lawless Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 12:28 PM
So if I sit around thinking of running I'll burn more calories than if I actually buy sneakers and run?
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 9:44 PM
ok, I am interested in this 20% calorie usage!!! Gosh, I am constantly exercising brain. where is the weight loss?Where IS it, dang nab it!!! This was sure an interesting one. Congrats for your win.
Walker  Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 10:27 PM
Thanks Andrea... I love your way at; however, keep your head and lose the body fat. LOL Hugs Verlena
Puddifoot Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 5:57 PM
this is a really interesting topic and piece; a little more 'poetic' language would have had this placing much higher, but it's good to see lines such as "your clown frown is on" and my fave line of all "you are a click of hyperactivity" - congrats on your win in my contest!
Walker  Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 6:04 PM
Thanks Charlotte for the consideration. This piece is philosophically written and therefore, it seems to be less 'poetic'; however, it is in truth to its meaning "...that common sense is the best sense; therefore, defined something better and you will refine your essence." VSW... Hugs Verlena
Kendrick Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 4:32 PM
Way to go ....Congrats..Sara
Walker  Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 4:56 PM
Thanks Sara... Verlena
Guzzi Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 7:27 AM
Good morning Verlena, love your choice of topic - please do work a bit more use sensory input - it seemed like you are speaking of a colored scan -what does the brain look like when at optimum function, use poetic language hon, alliteration, simile, metaphor ... show. You have plenty time and a great topic. Light & love
Walker  Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 4:55 PM
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Walker  Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 1:34 PM
Really... This is a contest... LOL I will follow your instructions Debbie or remove this from the contest. What is up for wager? Hugs Verlena
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