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Laurel, the Flower

Dedicated to Laura Breidenthal, my sister... Laurel, oh sweet Laurel of past Spring Awe-inspiring and amazing in the Fall time Understanding and bright at the end of Autumn Radiant with undying might at the beginning of Winter Lovely to look at at times of tribulation in the end of Winter Laurel is the flower of dreams Laurel will never fall at the seams Laurel is a plant of delight Laurel will fight the good fight!

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Date: 8/27/2019 12:02:00 PM
Lovely dedication, J.W., the changing seasons is a favourite theme of mine. It's a spectrum of colours and emotions too, which you've utilised really well here. Small world, I just visited one of Laura's poems too!
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Date: 8/27/2019 5:55:00 PM
Thank you! :-) The changing seasons is what makes my poem special and unique. I have used my imagination to make this poetic piece and it turned out pretty good! That is epic! My real name is David Breidenthal. =) -JWE
Date: 8/26/2019 11:18:00 AM
A wonderful dedication poem for your sister. Beast wishes~ Warren
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Date: 8/26/2019 12:12:00 PM
Thank you kindly! Have a wonderful week! :)

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