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Laura Breidenthal



Her name is Laura, she blows me away To describe her, a sweetheart, in every way Probably three times her age But no matter what stage Always feel young when she visits my page © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 4/21/2015 9:17:00 AM
Ummm... Now LimmerJack... You always feel young when we All visit your page... Grandpa Troll wants me to take him to visit Laura's site. Umm... Those flowers are beautiful but... You know Valentines Day was 2 months ago... Don't you? Ahhh... That nap got him all turned around... He's such a Cute old Troll!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/21/2015 9:32:00 AM
She's been away far too lone... excited to have her back!!! xxx
Date: 4/20/2015 12:31:00 AM
Hello Jack, What a lovely tribute to a good poetry friend. Well done young man. Kind regards- John Platypus-Australia
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Date: 4/20/2015 5:37:00 AM
G'day Mr. Platypus! How come you're keeping all those unique creatures to yourself... you should share, don't ya think! Cheers from Canada!
Date: 4/19/2015 10:38:00 PM
Oh, I've read, and I just love it!!! ( as I do of many of your Limericks/narratives/quatrains...) "Always feel young when she visits my page" Do you really? I am so glad! You should always feel young, because you have a young, strong heart, that's probably made of gold! --and I'm not just sayin that... Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/20/2015 5:48:00 AM
AWWWWWW! Since you started visiting me again, can't wait to get up each morning to see your name!!! You have put a big charge in this old guy's heart! There are no words to adequately explain what your friendship means to me, my dearest sweet lady! Loads of love, Jack xxx
Date: 4/19/2015 10:32:00 PM
Great tribute,, lovely Jack,, hope she gets to read very soon!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/20/2015 5:50:00 AM
As you can see, she has read it and her kind words illustrate what I say in my tribute poem to her! Thank you dear Upma... as always, love and big hugs, Jack xxx
Date: 4/19/2015 7:35:00 PM
That's the key...you feel young
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/19/2015 8:55:00 PM
All you guys are so important to this old guy! Couldn't live without Poetry Soup!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 4/19/2015 5:23:00 PM
Try 4 times her age Jack at least ha ha ha:-) Hugs Jan xx love ya really dear brother xx
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Date: 4/19/2015 8:54:00 PM
4 times... REALLY! I have no idea how old she is but she sure is a sweetie! Thank you my dear sister Jan... love and hugs, Jack xxx