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Laura Breidenthal

Her name is Laura, she blows me away
To describe her, a sweetheart, in every way
Probably three times her age
But no matter what stage
Always feel young when she visits my page


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Carol Eastman Date: 4/21/2015 9:17:00 AM Ummm... Now LimmerJack... You always feel young when we All visit your page... Grandpa Troll wants me to take him to visit Laura's site. Umm... Those flowers are beautiful but... You know Valentines Day was 2 months ago... Don't you? Ahhh... That nap got him all turned around... He's such a Cute old Troll! Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 4/21/2015 9:32:00 AM She's been away far too lone... excited to have her back!!! xxx

John Williams Date: 4/20/2015 12:31:00 AM Hello Jack, What a lovely tribute to a good poetry friend. Well done young man. Kind regards- John Platypus-Australia Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 4/20/2015 5:37:00 AM G'day Mr. Platypus! How come you're keeping all those unique creatures to yourself... you should share, don't ya think! Cheers from Canada!

Laura Breidenthal Date: 4/19/2015 10:38:00 PM Oh, I've read, and I just love it!!! ( as I do of many of your Limericks/narratives/quatrains...) "Always feel young when she visits my page" Do you really? I am so glad! You should always feel young, because you have a young, strong heart, that's probably made of gold! --and I'm not just sayin that... Always, Laura Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 4/20/2015 5:48:00 AM AWWWWWW! Since you started visiting me again, can't wait to get up each morning to see your name!!! You have put a big charge in this old guy's heart! There are no words to adequately explain what your friendship means to me, my dearest sweet lady! Loads of love, Jack xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/19/2015 10:32:00 PM Great tribute,, lovely Jack,, hope she gets to read very soon! Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 4/20/2015 5:50:00 AM As you can see, she has read it and her kind words illustrate what I say in my tribute poem to her! Thank you dear Upma... as always, love and big hugs, Jack xxx

Tim Smith Date: 4/19/2015 7:35:00 PM That's the key...you feel young Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 4/19/2015 8:55:00 PM All you guys are so important to this old guy! Couldn't live without Poetry Soup!!!!!!!!!!

Jan Allison Date: 4/19/2015 5:23:00 PM Try 4 times her age Jack at least ha ha ha:-) Hugs Jan xx love ya really dear brother xx Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 4/19/2015 8:54:00 PM 4 times... REALLY! I have no idea how old she is but she sure is a sweetie! Thank you my dear sister Jan... love and hugs, Jack xxx