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Laura Breidenthal

Her name is Laura, she blows me away
To describe her, a sweetheart, in every way
Probably three times her age
But no matter what stage
Always feel young when she visits my page


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Carol Eastman

Date: 4/21/2015 9:17:00 AM

Ummm... Now LimmerJack... You always feel young when we All visit your page... Grandpa Troll wants me to take him to visit Laura's site. Umm... Those flowers are beautiful but... You know Valentines Day was 2 months ago... Don't you? Ahhh... That nap got him all turned around... He's such a Cute old Troll!

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/21/2015 9:32:00 AM

She's been away far too lone... excited to have her back!!! xxx

John Williams

Date: 4/20/2015 12:31:00 AM

Hello Jack, What a lovely tribute to a good poetry friend. Well done young man. Kind regards- John Platypus-Australia

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/20/2015 5:37:00 AM

G'day Mr. Platypus! How come you're keeping all those unique creatures to yourself... you should share, don't ya think! Cheers from Canada!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/19/2015 10:38:00 PM

Oh, I've read, and I just love it!!! ( as I do of many of your Limericks/narratives/quatrains...) "Always feel young when she visits my page" Do you really? I am so glad! You should always feel young, because you have a young, strong heart, that's probably made of gold! --and I'm not just sayin that... Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/20/2015 5:48:00 AM

AWWWWWW! Since you started visiting me again, can't wait to get up each morning to see your name!!! You have put a big charge in this old guy's heart! There are no words to adequately explain what your friendship means to me, my dearest sweet lady! Loads of love, Jack xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/19/2015 10:32:00 PM

Great tribute,, lovely Jack,, hope she gets to read very soon!

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/20/2015 5:50:00 AM

As you can see, she has read it and her kind words illustrate what I say in my tribute poem to her! Thank you dear Upma... as always, love and big hugs, Jack xxx