laundry

wet laundry hanging on the line in the garden - - he sips a cool beer

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2024 9:46:00 AM

Ireally like this, Jack. Congrats

Terry Miller

Date: 7/3/2024 3:52:00 AM

cool, congratulations

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/2/2024 10:38:00 PM

poor guy. funny image dear poet. Congratulations

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/2/2024 4:24:00 PM

Jack, congratulations on your winning placement, cute and clever.

Constance La France

Date: 6/27/2024 3:22:00 AM

Jack, delightful, I can see the laundry flapping in the breeze while you and I chat the day away, me with tea though, Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2024 12:59:00 PM

awesome one. I'd call it senryu

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/26/2024 7:41:00 AM

Creative lines. I guess it is time to relax. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Tom Woody

Date: 6/26/2024 6:07:00 AM

It's only right he should be rewarded for caring for a necessary chore :)