Launched In Lavender

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Lilacs Bouquet Vase - Free photo on Pixabay

*Image of Lilacs Bouquet Vase by Pixabay. Launched In Lavender A bunch of bluish clouds cried at the margins of a reddish sunset, and bathes beds of white flowers into lavender lilacs. 2020 March 13 *HM* Bite Size Poem no15 ~~Line Gauthier: Judged 2021 August 01 *3rd Place* STRAND CHOICE G, any form, any theme ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2020 March 16

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Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 8/3/2021 12:00:00 AM

Congrats for a worthy winner at more than one place

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/3/2021 1:05:00 AM

Thanks. Aniruddha, twice as much. Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/2/2021 1:59:00 PM

I love lilacs William! Your use of color and the idea that the sunset colors "lavender lilacs" in a "bunch of blush" is so unique and a wonderful visual treat. Delightful tanka my friend. Blessings of sunsets to color your twilights my aloha friend!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/2/2021 3:00:00 PM

Admittedly, this was caught on a whim, Sam, as I focused on a natural concept that befits a tanka format, and voila. Your obliging words elicit a prosperous endeavor that I take to heart my friend, irrespective of hurricanes tickling the island again, Aloha!