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Laughter Recall

Playing in sunshine
is a twirling girl and cat
Meows and laughter
Romping away sweet moments
until the day is drowsing

In tall green grasses
pretty kitty's soon sleeping
in shadows of day
The orange sun's retreating
in meadow of memories
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
April 28, 2023 at 2:00 PM
A lovely write/picture. I had cats as a kid and loved each one. Your write has good memories for me. Have a great day/weekend..................
Buehler Avatar
April 28, 2023 at 6:49 PM
I'm so glad this poem held happy associations for you, Paula. Thank you for sharing your happy thoughts. Hope your evening and weekend are wonderful. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
April 28, 2023 at 1:41 AM
An elegant poem. Loved it.
Buehler Avatar
April 28, 2023 at 12:23 PM
Thank you so much. :)
Conn Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 12:24 AM
I had a couple of groovy cats. They would vomit in my shoes. They were very helpful imps.
Buehler Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 10:27 AM
Cats are so fun. I once had a cat that knew his name, and would come when I'd call. :)
Y. Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 7:49 PM
Hi Evelyn, You painted an adorable scene with your skillful hand. I enjoyed the view. Well done. Have a great evening;-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 7:57 PM
Hi Alexis, Thank you so much for your kind expressions. Hope your evening is wonderful, too. Evelyn :)
Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 7:35 PM
Such a nice setting you've painted for this romp, Evelyn. ~ Colors forever, gw
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 7:45 PM
And laughter recalled forever too!
Buehler Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 7:55 PM
Thank you very much for your rousing words of support, Gershon. Cats forever, too.
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