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Let's Minichu on Laughter Contest Sponsored by Mohan Chutani

                                         August 22, 2023

sometimes when I'm wiggling I get carried away and lose my self-control start giggling it is my style to bring laughter as I cajole a smile there's worth found in a soul mirth sometimes when I'm wiggling to bring laughter as I cajole mirth

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Date: 9/3/2023 9:05:00 AM
I'm laughing at and with you with this one Lin. Thanks so much
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Date: 8/22/2023 2:48:00 PM
I'm struggling to write the form it is so challenging to get it to make sense, but i wont rush to finish it, you nailed it Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/22/2023 1:05:00 PM
Laughing is good--I agree. However, when I feel depressed, which does happen, I can't stand other people laughing. It's funny because just a few weeks ago I couldn't stop laughing at how silly and crazy a working life really is. Nice job in your poem.
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Date: 8/22/2023 1:20:00 PM
Thanks ever so kindly. Your visits to my poetry today were delightful.
Date: 8/22/2023 11:06:00 AM
In my case, "giggling" often leads to "wiggling", and I never need to be "cajoled" into laughing. BOL in the contest, Lin.
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Date: 8/22/2023 1:19:00 PM
Thanks Jim. Laughter really can change our lives. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 8/22/2023 8:52:00 AM
Nice Minichu Lin, definitely not enough mirthful laughter around, but hey at least you’re trying to bring a smile to our faces, great entry, cheers David
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Date: 8/22/2023 9:00:00 AM
I'm trying, David. Minichu can be fun to write, but it's also challenging with its stipulations. Thanks for liking this one.
Date: 8/22/2023 7:01:00 AM
Lin. Laughter every day is better than eating an apple. Thank you...
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Date: 8/22/2023 8:05:00 AM
That's the way I see it, too, Jeff. Thank you for your thoughts.
Date: 8/22/2023 4:43:00 AM
Laughter is certainly the best medicine Lin, we need more of it with all the doom and gloom at the moment. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 8/22/2023 4:46:00 AM
Good morning and thanks, Tom. Laughter is needed in our lives more and more each day. I'm trying to get things posted before I sail away.

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