Laughing Winds

Hear the laughing winds Mindless of all the gaming going on below, just wanting To see all dancing. Wiping away tears Erasing sad memories Sweeping away miseries With their melodies. By CarolineCecile Copyright © 07.16.11

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Daver Austin

Date: 7/21/2011 11:53:00 AM

Very breezy write. It is so hot! Your poem has cooled me a bit. "Gaming going on below" That's for sure. Love, daver

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

Date: 7/18/2011 2:25:00 AM

Nice and simple, like it.

Date: 7/17/2011 12:12:00 PM

Much to ponder about in this poem. Good use of imagery to share your thoughts. Thank you for sharing them with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/16/2011 9:00:00 PM

lovely piece Caroline.. a true vision of better times in Nature and the World luv.. it can be accomplished if all work as one.. luv this one ..so sensitive ..thankxx for your warm and always welcome comments my friend...