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Laughing Lunatics Lounge

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Within my psychedelic psychosis divided by hell’s malignant mitosis, Navigated by narcotized neurosis absorption through opiate osmosis… Within my lunatic leverage of will, I needed to miraculously madly mill, The negligent neurons of my ill amidst a faltering fragment of my spill. My eyes that bear the bevel upon derelict distortions of a devious devil, Laboring the leprous level of the seismic seizures that I neatly nestle… In the abyss of my lacrimal laugh, I stand segmental with my satirical staff, Decorative deceptions on my behalf as I stare at the world a genuine gaffe. No real resolution to ponder for the quicksand of mind quivers yonder, A sinkhole of a weeping wander amongst sacrifices of a slaving squander… Thus in my sanctimonious seclusion within my catacombs of confusion, The universe disperses diffusion along with programmatic parallel illusion. June.06.2019 Eight Word Challenge Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann Placed 5'th...Thank You

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Susan Ashley

Date: 7/6/2019 10:48:00 PM

Oh my bro bro, your exceptional poem blows your sane sissy’s mind. Fabulous use of the required words and amazing rhymes. Potent and expressive! Congratulations on your wonderful win, sissy so proud of you. Love and hugs.. Illum <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/2/2019 4:42:00 PM

Your alliteration makes for a most endearing read. Congrats on your read WW.

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 7/2/2019 10:56:00 AM

Wow, rhymes! And the crazy content that deserves gold. Perfectly done, W.W. Rays of respect.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 7/2/2019 4:24:00 AM

Very powerful. Congratulations on your win in my contest. An apt analysis. Kind wishes, Kai

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/18/2019 7:44:00 PM

Utterly amazing. A FAVE. Dizzying, honestly! ~ Gershon

Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2019 11:03:00 AM

fabulous rhyme ^WW^ and I love the pictures too. you wove the words in so well:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/8/2019 2:48:00 AM

WOW ^WW^ this write is awesome - maybe I need something like this lunatics lounge to cheer me up - sorry I was so down in it my last comment - things sometimes get on top of you, but just posted a poem that sorts me out! Hugs, Jens.

John Hamilton

Date: 6/6/2019 9:27:00 PM

Your internal rhyme is amazing, your understanding of how to rhyme is off the charts, this should do well in the contest!

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/6/2019 8:47:00 AM

Wow, amazing rhyming and well written. ! Great one WW :)