Linda-Marie Sweetheart Poet Rhyme

Laud Lovelight

  "Laud Lovelight"


harvest Moon
glows light golden cocoon
satin sphere invades indigo sky

sequined stars twinkle essence; harps of Angels sigh
myriads of moonbeams cast charmed web for love fly

delicate emotions etch each night
radiant shards stream bright
laud lovelight.


*For Nette Onclaud's Night Melody Contest.
*Written by:  Linda-Marie The "Sweetheart" of P.S.
*using 1 2 3 sequence 

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Rachel Treacher May 9, 2026 at 8:03 AM Adore your line 'sequinned stars'. Perfect

Skat A March 13, 2014 at 2:23 AM lovely...~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A September 1, 2012 at 11:00 AM Hi Linda My bff,, for life,, , Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's NIGHT MELODY---TROIS-par-par par-what a HUIT :-) :-) contest... I love your entry... always~ PD

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2012 at 10:24 AM Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Night Melody" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Cynthia Alvez August 29, 2012 at 12:34 PM The WOW factor! Congratulations...an awesome poem. Cynthia

Andrea Dietrich August 28, 2012 at 7:51 PM Beautiful win for a beauty of a poem. I remember how much I loved this the first time I saw it. Congrats to you, sweetie pie.

Kash Poet August 28, 2012 at 2:00 PM Wonderful picture you have penned here Linda!Congrats on the win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 28, 2012 at 9:49 AM WON 2nd place ... thankxxx...

Joann Grisetti August 28, 2012 at 9:18 AM A beautiful picture for nette. Congratulations.

Nette Onclaud August 28, 2012 at 6:30 AM beautiful slew of tones that depict the essence of a lovely night, sweets... cheers to you for the greeat win in my contest!..:) huggs!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 28, 2012 at 6:11 AM Congratulations Linda Marie another beautiful poem xx

Lee Ramage August 28, 2012 at 5:55 AM Beautiful poem. I reminds me of the view I get each night in the countryside. Well done. congratulations on your win. Lee

Bl Devnath August 25, 2012 at 10:26 AM Fantastic one enjoyed much. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich August 24, 2012 at 8:17 PM rereading this one. It has so much great imagery, Linda. Gosh, I sure hope you get to play grandma!! So you are recovering from another hand surgery?

Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2012 at 4:58 PM this one very nicely done as well. I really have to get started on this one. Loved your imagery. I feel really bad for you how your hands are. It's both hands? Do they seem hopeful for a new treatment? I sure hope so, Linda. Please take care and eat more calories. You have to give nourishment to your body! Luv, Andrea

Russell Sivey August 22, 2012 at 10:06 AM Wow, Linda-Marie, you have fascinated me with this superior write here! I truly love your moon delight that you have written about my friend! The title of this poem surely fits the write so very well! I wish I has thought of to write about the moon for my poem, oh well, you've done a masterful job! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!! Russell Sivey August 22, 2012 at 10:09 AM I meant for my sentence to go like this, "I wish I had thought to write of the moon for my poem, oh well, you've done a masterful job!"

Cyndi Macmillan August 22, 2012 at 8:23 AM Really, really enjoyed this write, LM! One of your best. I am certain Nette will feel the same. Too much too like to comment on just one line. Whata write! Hugs, Cyndi

S.Jagathsimhan Nair August 22, 2012 at 7:19 AM A brilliant work, friend, certain to be placed high.. haven't read you in a while..how is health..best to you,luv!! Jag

Cory Long August 22, 2012 at 5:31 AM You have away with words and how you can toucha heart.. I loved your poem.. good luck in the contest.. Hope you are feeling a little better.. miss you cory

Delysia Hendricks August 21, 2012 at 10:42 PM You've managed to create a gentle flow which puts the reader right there on the spot with you. "Harps of angels sigh." That's eloquence for you. Good luck in Nette's contest with this magical piece, Linda. :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 21, 2012 at 10:15 PM that old devil Moon emits love all the time.. so enjoy poets.. thankxx for all your prayers too.. I feel them all..