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Lattice of a Bridge

Far, far way you've gone beyond worlds that divided us in a time I cannot shape or mold-- just shadows, just shadows of you that now visions barely see the pewter breeze combing your fibrous-winter hair: O like so, I weep, I linger at the eyes my essence knows so well….they are but hazy tones disappearing from our longing gaze shared along a bridge covered by the old lattice of trusses and boughs: And I dream of you with an affection more golden than Snow's moonlight craving for timber of reveries and fables that hold our secrets telling us about love’s forlorn destiny…yet this heart keeps us near, grasping a pain not too tight on a hundred- meter stretch until you passed the border without me. Alone for a walk, I know you're just breathing, lounging, curling right by my side..all the while. Covered Bridge for Craig Cornigh’s Contest 8/26/2017

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Date: 9/4/2017 2:05:00 PM
Great write and win Nette...Congrats
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Date: 9/3/2017 10:20:00 PM
dreamy...in every nuanced sense of the word...wonderful Nette
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Date: 9/3/2017 7:06:00 AM
I seem to have chosen to read mournful yet beautiful writes by you today Nette.
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Date: 9/2/2017 10:00:00 PM
Wonderful words Nette, congratulations...
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Date: 9/2/2017 7:57:00 PM
Hi Nette, stunningly beautiful and strong in content and imagery. Pure poetic blissful expression, such a pleasure for me to read this evening. I hope you are having a wonderful evening... Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 9/2/2017 11:59:00 AM
So beautiful and lush! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/2/2017 11:52:00 AM
Vivid imagery and a powerful write, Nette! Congratulations on your high-placed win! Regards, John.
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Date: 9/2/2017 10:45:00 AM
Your vision and heart applies the beauty through your writes, Nette, congratulation on a great win..~`*
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Date: 8/30/2017 9:43:00 AM
Creative and beautiful, Nette! This is what I call poetry! Hugs // paul
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Date: 8/27/2017 1:07:00 PM
Palpable! Your poetry moved me.
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Date: 8/27/2017 3:47:00 AM
Touched by the haunting language of this intense poem impressed deeply on my mind!
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Date: 8/26/2017 4:52:00 PM
Wonderful poem, I loved the line "your fibrous-winter hair: O like so," I will now tell everyone that my hair is also fibrous winter hair!!!!!! :)
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Date: 8/26/2017 3:41:00 PM
Love will bridge the gap....Very well penned Nette
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Date: 8/26/2017 2:10:00 PM
This is a VERY well written poem Nette. I hope that it will place well in the contest. Excellent :)
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Date: 8/26/2017 11:46:00 AM
you, my friend, are a true romantic of the highest order...a poet's heart beats within your spirit and deserves admiration for its beauty...
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Date: 8/26/2017 6:52:00 AM
Such a poetic beauty--well written, nette--good luck for the contest!
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