Lattice of a Bridge

Far, far way you've gone beyond worlds that divided us in a time I cannot shape or mold-- just shadows, just shadows of you that now visions barely see the pewter breeze combing your fibrous-winter hair: O like so, I weep, I linger at the eyes my essence knows so well….they are but hazy tones disappearing from our longing gaze shared along a bridge covered by the old lattice of trusses and boughs: And I dream of you with an affection more golden than Snow's moonlight craving for timber of reveries and fables that hold our secrets telling us about love’s forlorn destiny…yet this heart keeps us near, grasping a pain not too tight on a hundred- meter stretch until you passed the border without me. Alone for a walk, I know you're just breathing, lounging, curling right by my side..all the while. Covered Bridge for Craig Cornigh’s Contest 8/26/2017
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May Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 2:05 PM
Great write and win Nette...Congrats
Mohn Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 10:20 PM
dreamy...in every nuanced sense of the word...wonderful Nette
Inman Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 7:06 AM
I seem to have chosen to read mournful yet beautiful writes by you today Nette.
Smith Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 10:00 PM
Wonderful words Nette, congratulations...
Ashley Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Hi Nette, stunningly beautiful and strong in content and imagery. Pure poetic blissful expression, such a pleasure for me to read this evening. I hope you are having a wonderful evening... Congratulations on your win :)
Webster Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 11:59 AM
So beautiful and lush! Congratulations!
Michaels Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 11:52 AM
Vivid imagery and a powerful write, Nette! Congratulations on your high-placed win! Regards, John.
Roper Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 10:45 AM
Your vision and heart applies the beauty through your writes, Nette, congratulation on a great win..~`*
Callus Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 9:43 AM
Creative and beautiful, Nette! This is what I call poetry! Hugs // paul
Paras Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 1:07 PM
Palpable! Your poetry moved me.
Vaso Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 4:52 PM
Wonderful poem, I loved the line "your fibrous-winter hair: O like so," I will now tell everyone that my hair is also fibrous winter hair!!!!!! :)
May Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 3:41 PM
Love will bridge the gap....Very well penned Nette
Sands Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 2:10 PM
This is a VERY well written poem Nette. I hope that it will place well in the contest. Excellent :)
Parker Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 11:46 AM
you, my friend, are a true romantic of the highest order...a poet's heart beats within your spirit and deserves admiration for its beauty...
Pandit Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 6:52 AM
Such a poetic beauty--well written, nette--good luck for the contest!
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