Latin Lover

The heat of your breath hitting against me Firing up my insides...seethingly sexy Against my neck fascination begins Bearing your silken Latin mocha skin Wanton chocolate eyes melt me again Dozens of synergies and elements connect None I have had ...ever had this effect Feeling like a kid :) ...hands in your pocket Pressing your cool nose against my eye socket... :) Silly me ....enjoying the simplest fun feeling Slowly I exhale ...soothingly healing Cherry wood pops in the fireplace tonight You craving my passion lust takes it's bite Complete and rightous I invincibly smile Kiss me again love, let's mesh for a while.... Take me in the room walk me single file ~

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John Loving Iii

Date: 4/7/2009 5:13:00 PM

You have just wowed me. this turns me all the way on. you want to turn on a man let him read this. and if he isn't brain dead he'll hop in line right away. away away away to my fav list. John Henry Loving III

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/25/2009 6:51:00 AM

just miraculous, new fresh love, falling in love, one never forgets the delight, so happy for you!"Dozens of synergies and elements connect / None I have had ...ever had this effect" Loved this line & the ....is so right makes the reader draw in their breath! Light & Love

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 3/24/2009 11:36:00 AM

Wonderful poem here, light, fun, exploring, great imagery! Keep up the good work! THank you for your comments on my Chair poem also! ~Trudy~

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 3/22/2009 11:16:00 AM

Woohoo!! ...quite the steamy piece here! Wonderful language and blistering imagery. Well done Janers! Best wishes, Keith (PS if you have time please take a look at 'Nightscapes;' it's a tribute to T.S. Eliot)

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/22/2009 7:11:00 AM

Sizzling and passionate write. Well, someone had an exciting night. Fun to read this most captivating poem! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/22/2009 7:05:00 AM

Oh my...so romantic...and one can witness the smiles and affection, and the connection between these two! Sexy and sweet! :) love, Carrie

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/21/2009 11:36:00 PM

"Cherry wood pops in the fireplace tonight" nice line Jane and lovely poem. Romanticism at its best...Raul