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Lateral thought

Crab on a mission So much inside that shell; leaves writing in the sand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/1/2008 3:26:00 AM
Awesome haiku of the little pincher! Well done haiku, love Kristin
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Date: 10/31/2008 1:37:00 PM
This is such a creative haiku. Nice use of imagery and personification. There is a lot of depth for just three lines. Good reading!! Karen
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Date: 10/31/2008 7:35:00 AM
So Much activity in a few little words. When I think about, crabs always look like their on a misson. Love it. BG
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Date: 10/31/2008 6:02:00 AM
Another masterful write Nigel. Lovely Haiku and great form. I am starting to think if these crabs actually think. I see their writing on the sand, but now you have thinking about what are their mission/purpose..this should occupy my thoughts all day..lol..great write.
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