Lateral

Vocal bean stalk strap
Singular vibrato snap
Snails echo outward

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Elaine George

August 28, 2009 at 1:46 AM

A visual and audio delight. lainie

Charmaine Chircop

August 10, 2009 at 12:42 PM

bravo--charma

August 9, 2009 at 5:21 PM

Good use of alliteration and imagery for a creative poem. Interesting view. Thank you for sharing this haiku with us and for your kind comments. Have a good week. Karen

August 9, 2009 at 10:36 AM

What a creative view. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing this haiku with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Debbie Guzzi

August 6, 2009 at 12:26 PM

goodness!? Light & Love

James Knox

August 3, 2009 at 4:34 PM

i enjoyed this haiku very much , thank you for your kind comments :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 2, 2009 at 11:00 AM

A very enjoyable read you have written and shared with us today. Thank you Cesar. I also thank you for you kind remarks on my poetry. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

August 2, 2009 at 12:59 AM

Interesting haiku Cesar, me gusta tu estilo...Raul

Sara Kendrick

August 1, 2009 at 12:02 AM

Very interesting Haiku. Sara

James Knox

July 31, 2009 at 8:46 PM

beautifully done , i got a good visual on this one :)

Derrick Burton

July 31, 2009 at 8:27 PM

yeah.... you got it... loved this piece. It flowed like silk in my mind. Thank you for your kind comments. Poetry takes imagination, use to be offended by that until I learned its true definition. Enjoy your night Poet and I enjoyed this very much. :)

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