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Vocal bean stalk strap Singular vibrato snap Snails echo outward

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Elaine George

Date: 8/28/2009 1:46:00 AM

A visual and audio delight. lainie

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/10/2009 12:42:00 PM

bravo--charma

Date: 8/9/2009 5:21:00 PM

Good use of alliteration and imagery for a creative poem. Interesting view. Thank you for sharing this haiku with us and for your kind comments. Have a good week. Karen

Date: 8/9/2009 10:36:00 AM

What a creative view. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing this haiku with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/6/2009 12:26:00 PM

goodness!? Light & Love

James Knox

Date: 8/3/2009 4:34:00 PM

i enjoyed this haiku very much , thank you for your kind comments :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/2/2009 11:00:00 AM

A very enjoyable read you have written and shared with us today. Thank you Cesar. I also thank you for you kind remarks on my poetry. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 8/2/2009 12:59:00 AM

Interesting haiku Cesar, me gusta tu estilo...Raul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/1/2009 12:02:00 AM

Very interesting Haiku. Sara

James Knox

Date: 7/31/2009 8:46:00 PM

beautifully done , i got a good visual on this one :)

Derrick Burton

Date: 7/31/2009 8:27:00 PM

yeah.... you got it... loved this piece. It flowed like silk in my mind. Thank you for your kind comments. Poetry takes imagination, use to be offended by that until I learned its true definition. Enjoy your night Poet and I enjoyed this very much. :)