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What if mine eyes were trained to see the eyes of God watching me. What if my pupil were old soul in young orb or my budding muse was more inquisitive. What if I were schooled to be seen and heard, with grammatically correct words. What if my chores consisted of travels, via books; with landscapes and minds to enrich mine. What if choreographed moves to piano tunes were another of my chores, before evening walks by the sea. What if I was told fresh air was comparable to God's breath, and morning was first gift. What if giving or sharing were expressed as voluntary instigator of blessings. What if I was made to see all races of us; young and old alike, as students and teachers until our last breath. What if I was shown the beauty of converse no harsh words of course... I'd C all A's and Bees. *

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Date: 4/22/2016 8:41:00 AM
I loved this Iris, mesmorising. And thank you for your kind words. Fiona
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Date: 4/13/2016 2:48:00 AM
Iris, What a great piece. I loved it. Entire poem is sound with several awesome lines. I enjoyed.........hugs
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 4/15/2016 8:47:00 AM
Have a wonderful weekend.
Date: 4/12/2016 9:56:00 PM
Iris this is an awesome poem. I believe that "would if's can turn into "I can and I will" Very creative
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Date: 4/15/2016 8:48:00 AM
May u have delightful weekend.
Date: 4/12/2016 2:11:00 PM
a beautiful write from a beautiful soul, enjoyed this one Iris :)
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 4/12/2016 3:01:00 PM
Thanks pd, and have a cozy day.
Date: 4/7/2016 10:38:00 PM
Forgot the rating...!
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Date: 4/12/2016 11:40:00 AM
Smart...!
Date: 4/7/2016 10:37:00 PM
This is a wonderful set of poetic questions and thoughts, Iris! Very creatively written, a 7 from me :)
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Date: 4/12/2016 11:46:00 AM
Wow! U returned with warmth. Bless you dear one.
Date: 4/7/2016 1:37:00 PM
wonderful wonderings Iris - I feel uplifted reading your lovely thoughts:-) hugs Jan xx
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 4/12/2016 11:50:00 AM
Thank you dear Jan. I find good thoughts emerging from reflections.
Date: 4/7/2016 12:12:00 PM
That would be seeing life with a fresh outlook and positivity, Iris! You share lovely and inspiring thoughts. ~ Regards // paul
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 4/12/2016 11:55:00 AM
Thanks Paul; you are an inspiration to many, including me. I see you've tracked me on FB, recalled you helping me with good advice, and I thank you. Have a wonderful day with blessings your way.
Date: 4/7/2016 11:52:00 AM
Great content. Insightful. I highly appreciate this one. Hugs Iris.
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 4/12/2016 12:03:00 PM
Reflections equals positive thoughts, Rajat.

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