Late Winter to Early Spring

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A Crow cawed Then a dove Cooed early while Still dark from cloudy Skies on this late winter's Morn, the only gold was the Daffodils' blossoms flashing smiles To the star magnolia's delicate Star shaped blooms seeking a friend before spring

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Regina Elliott

Date: 2/20/2024 6:54:00 AM

A beauteous tribute to the natural transition from wintertime to the joy of spring. Nice work, Sara. God's blessings to you. ~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/20/2024 7:38:00 AM

Why, thank you, Regina. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Jeanette Swan

Date: 2/18/2024 8:23:00 PM

Love the daffodils' golden smiles:) and nodding heads, starting a friendship with the magnolia. Joyful and pretty. Sweet. J :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/19/2024 6:45:00 AM

Thank you, Jeanette. Your review of my work was encouraging. Sara K

Howard Kerr

Date: 2/18/2024 8:06:00 AM

Amazing depth in transition between seasons portrayed imaginatively. Light and dark scene setting draws the reader into your apt word scape. Superb, Sara Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/18/2024 8:07:00 AM

Thank you, Howard. I like the superb as well. I feel honored that you would use it. Sara K

Kate Davies

Date: 2/16/2024 11:50:00 PM

Beautiful poem Sarah, daffodils blossoms flashing smiles made me smile :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2024 5:15:00 AM

I am glad that you got a smile out of the work, Kate. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/16/2024 9:08:00 AM

Dear Sara, Your poem in the shape of a pine tree is beautiful! It truly captures the essence of the season's transition, starting with the starkness of late winter and culminating in the hopeful anticipation of spring. It feels like we're climbing out of winter and reaching towards the sunnier days ahead. You are so creative. - Blessings, Daniel

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/16/2024 9:21:00 AM

Aren't we glad that we do get the transition of seasons so that we don't get stuck in prolonged winter or a hot, humid summer. Your kind review of my work is uplifting. We need all the blessings we can get. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/16/2024 8:33:00 AM

- Spring is always welcome, Sara ... a lovely poem :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/16/2024 9:19:00 AM

Ann-Lise, I can imagine the longing is even greater in a climate where you live. We are blessed with mild winters most years. Sometimes a lot of cold rain and northerly breezes or easterly breezes. Your visit with the smiley face and kind reviews are always welcome. Sara K