Late Winter Thaw

Chilled rivers swelled singing a sloshing lullaby
While past seasons threads flow on by
Warmth from above shifted in high
Fading hoof marks in shallow puddles of wet snow
Made from months or weeks ago
Feel the lurking breath of Mother Nature’s grin
Don’t be fooled by her springtime fling
Winter’s not passed just yet 
Springtime buds haven’t even set 
Battered limbs postured in place on crushed over paths 
The gray little sparrow found a corner to take his dirt bath 
A watchful eye peers from a crest on a tree
Waiting patiently for banquet and flea
A songbird takes advantage of a brief late winter vary
Smeared edges on snow left over from plodding looks scary 
And I walk with my boots parting the precipitation
Admiring winters late season temptation
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Rhinem Avatar
February 20, 2009 at 7:26 PM
Smile~I love this! Hello my dear and gifted friend Laura Mckenzie! What a wonderfully image filled and pleasant trek this was with you dear lady! Smile~I could see it all as you walked--and, I could feel the warmth inside of yourself for life and nature--along, with the depth of your reflecting Soul which you exposed here! "Very Wonderful Dear Lady!!!"~"Warmth & Blessings To You & Your Loves Always, John!":)
Strand Avatar
February 14, 2009 at 11:56 PM
Like this seasonal writing Laura.Rgds Brian
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February 14, 2009 at 10:44 AM
Laura, I see this great poem in two ways. Obviously, the changing of the seasons, but also the phases of life. You made me think. You made me feel. Such a gift! Thanks and happy Valentine's Day, Carolyn
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February 11, 2009 at 2:09 PM
Oh Laura, I so love it when you take us on your walks with you, and I so hate it when I realized I've mistakenly passed your poem by! Nothing gets missed by you, and your observations of nature are so beautifully penned! Such a lover of the beauty surrounding you during any season and such a talented poetess. Wonderful to read! Love, Shar
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February 8, 2009 at 8:43 PM
Laura, this is beautiful. The imagery is vivid and wonderful phrases throughout this. I think we are all longing for spring! Great write. Love, Robin
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