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Late Summer

Late Summer
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Theme: Memory
Emotion: Hope
Color: Gold
Season: Late Summer
Form: Free Verse
Object: Lantern
Verb: Remember

As the snow melts on the mountain
And a trickle began to fill the fountain
Filling the drained spring below
Then the river begins to flow

Snow on the mountain
A fire in the hearth
Snow on the mountain
Losing you broke my heart

I remember when our love was young
Sometimes the lights would go out
We'd light the lantern to see how to walk
But never has it snowed this early before

That snow covered the gold poplar  
All the leaves turned brown and fell
This shouldn't happen in late summer
But on this we couldn't dwell

Snow on the mountain
A fire in the hearth
Snow on the mountain 
Losing you broke my heart

Your hair was thin and white
Your hearing had disappeared
But you kept going and going
Until your health disappeared 

Snow on the mountain
A fire in the hearth
Snow on the mountain
Losing you broke my heart

I know we'll meet again my love
Jesus is waiting for me to come home
That will be a great reunion
Happiness we'll all share
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Young Avatar
September 25, 2026 at 12:25 PM
I feel a special connection to poems that speak of God and the poets that are able to communicate that special feeling towards HIS grace. You accomplished that so well. Beautiful work Sara. 🙏
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September 25, 2026 at 3:21 PM
Simone, I appreciate the spiritual connection revealed in your comments. Your visit was uplifting. 👍⭐. Sara K.
Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 8:21 PM
This is so spiritual and emotive. I love it, Sara. a fave
Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2026 at 5:02 AM
I am honored that you would fav it, Andrea. Your visit is uplifting. ❤️. Sara K.
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September 17, 2026 at 4:41 PM
awww, how touching and uplifting your poem is. Sending you hugs and blessings, Sara B.
Kendrick Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 5:03 PM
Thank you, Sara B., I need those hugs and those blessings as well. .👍⭐. Sara K.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 12:42 PM
What a lovely write/picture you have here. Love Both...  Have a lovely/blessed day writing away..........
Kendrick Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 2:33 PM
I am delighted you found it lovely, Paula. My day has been blessed in so many ways. 👍⭐. Sara K.
Andresen Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 11:31 AM
- A beautiful poem ... love the chorus, Sara :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 2:31 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. I am delighted you love the chorus. Thank you for the smiley face and the hug. 👍⭐. Sara K.
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