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Late Summer

Vicious when advance Soft winds, benign that ere danced, And take angry stance. __________________________________ Haiku |07.04.2021| Topic: summer, dance

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Date: 5/12/2021 10:34:00 PM
Yes, late summer does give this feeling!!
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Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 5/17/2021 7:23:00 AM
Thanks for the feedback... Tell me, rhyming a Haiku or Senryu is not necessary, but if one does, does it sound odd? I believe in taking small liberties, improvisations like our Indian classical music.

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