Late Summer

Vicious when advance
Soft winds, benign that ere danced,
And take angry stance.
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Haiku |07.04.2021|
Topic: summer, dance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 10:34 PM
Yes, late summer does give this feeling!!
Pathak Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 7:23 AM
Thanks for the feedback... Tell me, rhyming a Haiku or Senryu is not necessary, but if one does, does it sound odd? I believe in taking small liberties, improvisations like our Indian classical music.
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