Late Love Early

Defeated dusk light
Heart beating to the dozen
Waning dawn darkness





Something to make the ladies blush.

for Gareth James' "Familiarity Unknown" Haiku contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brjmohun Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 12:03 AM
I guess you don't get it David, however, there may be some ladies who do get it; regularly.
Byrne Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 7:44 PM
How would that make the ladies blush? I don't get it!
Hickman Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 7:22 PM
good luck in the contest,,,Blessings..cecil
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