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Late Christmas Night

She sat on a park bench late Christmas night a hallmark moment in my memory. For relaxing there, she was quite the sight her face shone as if buffed by emery. The soft snow lay like a fluffy duvet covering all in a blanket of white. And sitting slouched in a casual way, her silhouette stood out in the moonlight. She blended right in with the Yuletide mood earphones on, listening to Christmas songs. And finding her there I didn't intrude for in her mind, she was where she belongs. There are many ways to gift a present sometimes, simply by not being present. Nov. 24, 2018
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Marcum Wong Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 3:58 PM
I love your version of the photo Emile. We don't always need to communicate, but enjoy the beauty of silence! Congratulations on your top win! : ) xxoo
Pinet Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 3:19 PM
what a charming sonnet Emile, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Kendrick Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 6:48 AM
I do like sonnets and you winning work was an excellent one. Thanks for participating in my contest. I hope that this is the best Christmas and New Year up to this point in your life and may each year following be awesome. Sara
Pinet Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 9:26 AM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Sharp Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 12:47 AM
Very nicely written, Emile, good imagery and a very personal touch.
Pinet Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 7:55 AM
Thanks Lawrence, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 1:26 PM
Very nice Emile! I love this :)
Pinet Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 3:03 PM
Thanks Heidi, I'm pleased you like it my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Absolutely lovely, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 1:00 PM
Thanks Line, you never fail to bring a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Without even being conscious of it, I smiled at the crossed legs, and the gift of solitude. I can so relate, because solitude is something I am immensely happy about.
Pinet Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 9:26 AM
Thanks Caren, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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