Lasting Love

A tender touch-
are we asking to much
for love to last, let's say,
a month, a week, a day?

Ageless love-
impending time;

     So rare!
     So precious!
     So divine!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 8:37 PM
Yes it is surely asking too much. I am kidding. It is the bare minimum. If you do not have that, do not settle!
Proxenos Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 1:11 PM
I couldn't agree with you more - its not asking too much - it is divine, ageless love - love love this poem Allen! Hugs, Jennifer.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 3:09 PM
Thank you Jennifer
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 12:19 PM
Hello Allen Beilschmidt, we all yearn for all these things listed in this poem. Have a nice day my friend. I hope that all is well with you. have a nice day my friend.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 12:25 PM
Thank you Darlene
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