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Lasting Light

Colossal contradictions, curtail creativity Twisting thoughts, timing, trajectory Buffering, blending between boundaries Apprehending an artistic altercation Learning lessons, lovely light lasts Heidi Sands 3/26/21

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 3/26/2021 6:37:00 PM

Such a creative free verse. You are writing beautifully, and freely. Kudos!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/27/2021 5:52:00 AM

Thank you Sandy. I appreciate your kind feedback :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 3/26/2021 5:31:00 PM

interesting concept, I can see where more than a few stanzas would become more difficult...well done my friend...the letter x might contort the brain

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/27/2021 5:51:00 AM

lol. yes, the letter x would do just that, Frederic. I appreciate your comment on this. It was fun :)

Robertina B.

Date: 3/26/2021 4:05:00 PM

You free verse is so amazing, my friend.. Many twists and turns.. Really enjoyed! Many blessings to you..

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2021 4:46:00 PM

Thank you Robertina. I appreciate your kind comment very much and I'm happy you enjoyed it :)