Last Year, a Dream???

Too many good and bad times 
in the back of my mind, 
wanna leave alll that drama behind 
too many girls came n left in 2009 

all i really wanted was committment, 
but none of those girls was ever feeling it, 
so now that everytime i search and try to see, 
fearing that ill never find a woman that wont hurt me, 
ill admit last year wasnt really that successful 
tryin to get with girls that i thought was regrettable, 
now im searching for that right one in 2010
and hopefully that right one will give me hope again, 

cause everything aint what it seems 
i just wish last year was a dream...
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January 10, 2012 at 8:18 PM
People say that patience is the key. I enjoyed reading this.
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January 25, 2011 at 7:13 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured here at PoetrySoup this week Leonardo. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
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January 23, 2011 at 4:38 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. nice one to share with us all with luv..
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