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What did the wind feel like--
Blowing against your back
Riddled with whispers
You heard or imagined or both?
Was it cold,
The ground?
Did it scrape your knees
on the way down?
Or could you even notice through the noise?

I want to know
Was it hard to live in a world
that wanted you dead?
Is that why you couldn’t do it?
Tell me, please
I need to know
Was it all too much for you in the end
Or worse,
Did it never feel like enough?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Agustin Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 7:19 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Johns Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 7:34 PM
Amen. <3
HAYNES Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 10:33 PM
There was darkness to this piece but it also shone with light. Again I enjoy your writing.
Johns Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 8:31 AM
Thank you very much :)
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