Last Words

I’ve written all the poems I could write
in this short span of earth life given me.
This final poem may seem a bit trite.
My finest sonnet it’s not meant to be.
It is a declaration of my love
and gratitude for you who now are here
to see me off! Know I’ve had plenty of
good living, so you need not shed a tear!
To relatives and good friends listening
to these last words of mine, you need to know
I hold you precious. More than anything,
have faith that to a good place we all go
and that I am with loved ones passed away.
I’ll see you all again one blessed day.

July 16, 2018 for Gregory R. Barden's My Muse, Mortal - Poetry Contest
(blessed pronounced as two separate syllables
Also, even though I pronounce poem as one syllable, I am using Howmanysyllables.com to count it as two syllables)
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Gentry Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 3:31 AM
Congratulations on your win. Heartfelt expressive.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 3:23 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win. A great verse.
Pappadogiannis Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 12:08 AM
The perfect words for one's last moments! Beautiful. Congratulations on your win Andrea :) xx
Wolf Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 9:19 PM
Elegantly expressed, Andrea! Congrats on your win in the contest. ~ gw
May Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 5:31 PM
Dropping back with my Congrats Andrea
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 8:56 AM
I love this. Congratulations on your win Andrea! :) xomo!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 3:15 AM
Brilliantly composed Andrea. It could be used as a eulogy for anyone. Congratulations on your Third Placement. It is great being in your company my friend! : ) xxoo
Moorman Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 2:56 AM
Andrea, I couldn't help but shed a tear just reading your entry because you have been such a great support to me and a true friend over the years. I know those you leave behind will miss your smile, your tender caring touch, and the love that flows from the great poems you write. Congratulations on your win!
Barden Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 2:56 AM
I just loved this, Andrea, and totally agree with Line - not remotely trite, but heartfelt and woven like a window tapestry - diaphanous and sweet, that lilts along in the breeze! Gorgeous imagery and phrasing, and I know this came from the soul ... you will always be one of my favorite poets here, and THIS is a perfect example as to WHY! Congratulations on your THIRD PLACE in the 'My Muse, Mortal' Poetry Contest - blessings, Buddy! :-) <3
Gauthier Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 6:10 AM
Beautiful, far from trite, Andrea.
Horne Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 10:15 AM
lovely thoughts here, my friend x
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 4:57 PM
This is marvelous Andrea! A life lived with worth is all any of us can hope for. A really great entry for the contest that is sure to do well! : ) xxoo
Acrich Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 11:59 AM
It is everyone wish that we see departed loved one even people that have died said they see them, but I kind of believe what John Lennon said you leave one car and get into another
Smith Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 11:47 AM
I hope we are blessed with many more Andrea, great entry, best wishes...
May Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 8:21 AM
Goodbyes are always so sad, glad it's just a poem for a contest...but sometimes we don't even get to say that last goodbye..
Ajmal Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 7:40 AM
Wow, it is a really touching write, a nice goodbye to everyone, I wish you best of luck in the contest but I wonder that when the last breath comes, will it gives us enough time to say goodbye to all the love ones, this moment we are alive, God knows whether we will be able to have other breath or not, that what is the cruelty of life, good luck and have a really nice day
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 3:35 PM
This would be pre-written on my death bed to have it read by someone at my funeral. That was my idea anyway, for his contest!
Horsman Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 4:28 PM
So glad it is only your imagination, so hard to tell with you. Your epic poetry; does have a way of taking one there. Good luck in contest
Faulkner Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 3:12 PM
This is so brave and beautiful, good luck in the contest!
Kiser Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 1:43 PM
Wow, you had me wondering, as well, about that first part but, this was a great sonnet. I hope that you have good luck in the contest, as well as, in your life.
Duet Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 9:38 PM
Wonderful "Last Words", Andrea. You are a great poet and I'm sure you are a great mother and wife and daughter etc.
Smith Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 7:31 PM
I hope there are many more poems to come.
Cunningham Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 5:36 PM
Lovely words to pass on in your final hours. Good luck. Tom
Krampe Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 5:28 PM
Great take on the contest prompt, but you had me wondering, too, at the beginning - until I figured it's probably for the mortal muse contest. Good luck.
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 4:45 PM
You had me wondering, Andrea at the start of your poem..a convincing goodbye your wrote for the contest..best for a win.
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