Valsa George Poet Footle

Last Wish Footles

One peg 
I beg

Keenly
Humbly

Last wish
Death wish

To fly
 Sky high

Why stare?
Don’t fear

Too weak
Need kick

Treat me
Boost me

Agree?
Deny?

Drink spree 
Feel glee

Thoughts fly
Pains flee

Head wheels
Mind reels

Lifts mood
No feud

Last sleep
Don’t weep
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June. 24.2022

~Placed fourth~

Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest

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Christuraj Alex June 29, 2022 at 11:39 PM Beautiful footle. I am still not able to understand what exactly a footle is. Congratulations!

Malabika Ray Choudhury June 29, 2022 at 5:42 AM Congratulations on your win, Valsa. A great Footle - every pair with uniquely creative! Love ~ Mala

Kim Rodrigues June 29, 2022 at 5:24 AM I love: Head wheels… Mind reels! Congratulations, Valsa!

Sotto Poet June 26, 2022 at 6:48 AM Valsa, I really enjoyed reading these wonderful little nuggets. You have created a collection of them that is quite unique.

Vijay Pandit June 26, 2022 at 6:35 AM Every pair an image that elaborates. Best to you, Valsa.

Victor Buhagiar June 25, 2022 at 12:56 PM Loved the third one. It applies to me. Hugs.

Sara Kendrick June 25, 2022 at 9:40 AM Enjoyed reading this creative little gems. You have done quite an unusual list of them. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara