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One peg I beg Keenly Humbly Last wish Death wish To fly Sky high Why stare? Don’t fear Too weak Need kick Treat me Boost me Agree? Deny? Drink spree Feel glee Thoughts fly Pains flee Head wheels Mind reels Lifts mood No feud Last sleep Don’t weep __________ June. 24.2022 ~Placed fourth~ Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/29/2022 11:39:00 PM
Beautiful footle. I am still not able to understand what exactly a footle is. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/29/2022 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Valsa. A great Footle - every pair with uniquely creative! Love ~ Mala
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Date: 6/29/2022 5:24:00 AM
I love: Head wheels… Mind reels! Congratulations, Valsa!
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Date: 6/26/2022 6:48:00 AM
Valsa, I really enjoyed reading these wonderful little nuggets. You have created a collection of them that is quite unique.
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Date: 6/26/2022 6:35:00 AM
Every pair an image that elaborates. Best to you, Valsa.
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Date: 6/25/2022 12:56:00 PM
Loved the third one. It applies to me. Hugs.
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Date: 6/25/2022 9:40:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this creative little gems. You have done quite an unusual list of them. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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