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Last Train To Auschwitz

one evening we were rounded up
it was our turn to go

we weren’t sure where we were headed
we had our doubts it wasn’t good

the men with guns meant business
and who were we to question

all aboard the midnight carrier
that foggy cold September

no one knew for sure
no one could believe

people were never heard from
the rumors had been plenty

men women and children
they crammed us in

just faceless nameless cattle
led astray from greener pastures 

the train charging well on through the night
the stench of fear more than we could bear

the train pulled into Auschwitz
and in the chaos that ensued

we understood the war was over

we’d taken the last train to Auschwitz
and in the daylight we could now see

those blood drenched murderous tracks 
that had moved the innocent like cattle
to the slaughterhouse



Read on air by invitation  ~  July 17, 2022  'POETS HARBOUR'

AP: 2nd place 2021, 3rd place 2025, 3rd place 2022

Submitted on April 9, 2021 for contest LAS TRAIN TO AUSCHWITZ sponsored by KAI MICHAEL NEUMANN  -  RANKED 4TH
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Roper Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 10:56 PM
Line, great write, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Gauthier Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Thanks, Eve ~
Andresen Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 6:49 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in this contest, Line - A brutal topic to write about ... but, will never be forgotten - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 10:00 AM
Yes, a brutal topic indeed ~
Ligon Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 2:48 PM
Such a horrific reality. You wrote a powerful memorial. Congratulations!
Gauthier Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 3:38 PM
Thanks, Juliet ~ much appreciated
Neumann Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 8:13 AM
This is a very powerful poem. Congratulations on your win in my contest.
Gauthier Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 8:38 AM
Thank you so much, Kai ~ most appreciated. Thanks for hosting this awesome inspirational contest.
Cunningham Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 2:39 AM
Back with my congratulations Line, every verse I read for this contest told of the horrors inflicted on those poor souls who perished. I hope you are well. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 8:39 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comments, Tom ~
Mcguire Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 10:10 PM
This subject breaks my heart more than anything else. I can only imagine the terror of the children. Evil is alive and well like a lion looking for a soul to devour. God help us all.
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 8:50 AM
All the more important we try to contribute to making the world a better place in whatever way we can, no matter how small ~
Buehler Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 8:38 PM
Your well expressed, heartfelt poem relates one of the saddest chapters in human history, Line. Kindest regards, Evelyn
Gauthier Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 5:12 AM
Absolutely, Evelyn. It's appalling ~ there have been many dark pages in the history of mankind.
Romios Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 5:16 PM
Dramatic, Line. Best wishes PANGIE
Gauthier Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 8:55 PM
Yes ~ I found Kai's contest very inspiring ~
Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 1:42 PM
very thoughful reflection of it, Line. People need to remember it and how it can happen again so easily.
Gauthier Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 2:54 PM
Thanks, Andrea ~
Krutsinger Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 4:26 AM
Such a horrible thing; I cannot fathom it. "just faceless nameless cattle led astray from greener pastures " Incredibly sad; you did a great job with the prompt, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 7:26 AM
Thanks, Caren ~
Cunningham Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 2:14 AM
A harrowing verse Line, it's a dark period in history that cannot be sugar coated in any way. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 7:26 AM
So true, Tom ~
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