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one evening we were rounded up it was our turn to go we weren’t sure where we were headed we had our doubts it wasn’t good the men with guns meant business and who were we to question all aboard the midnight carrier that foggy cold September no one knew for sure no one could believe people were never heard from the rumors had been plenty men women and children they crammed us in just faceless nameless cattle led astray from greener pastures the train charging well on through the night the stench of fear more than we could bear the train pulled into Auschwitz and in the chaos that ensued we understood the war was over we’d taken the last train to Auschwitz and in the daylight we could now see those blood drenched murderous tracks that had moved the innocent like cattle to the slaughterhouse Read on air by invitation ~ July 17, 2022 'POETS HARBOUR' AP: 2nd place 2021, 3rd place 2022 Submitted on April 9, 2021 for contest LAS TRAIN TO AUSCHWITZ sponsored by KAI MICHAEL NEUMANN - RANKED 4TH

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Date: 5/6/2021 10:56:00 PM
Line, great write, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/7/2021 9:59:00 AM
Thanks, Eve ~
Date: 5/6/2021 6:49:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in this contest, Line - A brutal topic to write about ... but, will never be forgotten - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/7/2021 10:00:00 AM
Yes, a brutal topic indeed ~
Date: 5/5/2021 2:48:00 PM
Such a horrific reality. You wrote a powerful memorial. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/5/2021 3:38:00 PM
Thanks, Juliet ~ much appreciated
Date: 5/5/2021 8:13:00 AM
This is a very powerful poem. Congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Date: 5/5/2021 8:38:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kai ~ most appreciated. Thanks for hosting this awesome inspirational contest.
Date: 5/5/2021 2:39:00 AM
Back with my congratulations Line, every verse I read for this contest told of the horrors inflicted on those poor souls who perished. I hope you are well. Tom
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Date: 5/5/2021 8:39:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comments, Tom ~
Date: 4/14/2021 10:10:00 PM
This subject breaks my heart more than anything else. I can only imagine the terror of the children. Evil is alive and well like a lion looking for a soul to devour. God help us all.
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Date: 4/15/2021 8:50:00 AM
All the more important we try to contribute to making the world a better place in whatever way we can, no matter how small ~
Date: 4/11/2021 8:38:00 PM
Your well expressed, heartfelt poem relates one of the saddest chapters in human history, Line. Kindest regards, Evelyn
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Date: 4/12/2021 5:12:00 AM
Absolutely, Evelyn. It's appalling ~ there have been many dark pages in the history of mankind.
Date: 4/10/2021 5:16:00 PM
Dramatic, Line. Best wishes PANGIE
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Date: 4/10/2021 8:55:00 PM
Yes ~ I found Kai's contest very inspiring ~
Date: 4/10/2021 1:42:00 PM
very thoughful reflection of it, Line. People need to remember it and how it can happen again so easily.
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Date: 4/10/2021 2:54:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea ~
Date: 4/10/2021 4:26:00 AM
Such a horrible thing; I cannot fathom it. "just faceless nameless cattle led astray from greener pastures " Incredibly sad; you did a great job with the prompt, Line.
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Date: 4/10/2021 7:26:00 AM
Thanks, Caren ~
Date: 4/10/2021 2:14:00 AM
A harrowing verse Line, it's a dark period in history that cannot be sugar coated in any way. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 4/10/2021 7:26:00 AM
So true, Tom ~

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