Jodie Williams Poet Triolet

Last Train Home

Forever have your name engraved,
Un-eroding, infinately imprinted.
Ice cold track, a final grave,
Forever have your name engraved,
Raised her eyes then knelt and prayed.
Beneath her weight, the deathbed glinted,
Forever have your name engraved,
Un-eroding, infinately imprinted. 


Jodie Williams for
Nette's In the Afterglow contest
7 Aug 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 15, 2011 at 10:41 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "In The Afterglow" contest Jodie. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta August 14, 2011 at 8:37 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Jodie

John Freeman August 14, 2011 at 5:45 PM Jodie, Great to see your poem doing well in Nette's contest. Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 14, 2011 at 4:31 PM Congrats Jodie on your top ten win in Nette's contest with this excellent entry luv..enjoy...