Last Time I Saw You Alive...

Congratulations on the win.

congrats on the well deserved win!! Take care!

there are many intense emotions there in moments such as these.and seconds later regret comes in.but there is always that question, who will go after the other... great write, Tim. I hope all goes well. ~Always&Forever Lynette

I'm so glad this made it to the winners circle. It was very moving. A lesson in it for all of us. :) Congratulations, Tim!

Congratulations on your win Tim. This is a moving poem. Thank you for your comments also. Aloha, Connie

Congratulations on your win Tim in Paula Swanson's contest " Two Wrongs Don't Make A Right". Love, Carol

Congratulations on your win with this incredible write, Tim. (still no news yet -- in this case, no news is bad news) Love, Carolyn

Congrats on well deserved win, Tim

One of my favorites in this contest. Congrats, Tim! LUv, Andrea

Congratulations on yur win with this sad senryu. Love, Joyce

Congrats Tim on your winning poem in Paula's contest .. wise words to heed.. enjoy your sweet success.. with luv from Italy..caio..luv..

Dear Tim, I know your heart aches when you think of this. You had no way of knowing this would be the last time you would see him. I think Paula will be very moved by this true story. There is nothing that can compensate for such a loss. Love, Carolyn

sad thoughts...hope it never happens like that.

Good luck in the contest with this great write..Hope just a write and not life...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work about "Wal-Marts Georgia"...Glad you got a laugh out of reading it..Sara

hate when this happens this is a great entry for the contest I just finished mine called liar liar lol also thanks for your kind comment on my poem for 2012 yikes have a great day Tim

It is a mistake we have all made at one time our another....painful lesson indeed. This is exactly what Paula's contest is needing....the honest double errors in judgement we all make. Well done. Carrie

Unforunately, this happens far to often--then one lives with the regrets. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

Well expressed thoughts, Tim

so true isn't it,the impact of words said,or not said can linger either way....peace , jay

Great Senryu Tim..good luck in the contest.. enjoyed during my long flight.. with luv..

:( Oh! So difficult and painful, though a well written Senryu, Tim! Good luck in the contest. Caroline.

AWESOME. well, I could not think of ONE thing for this contest (because I never do bad and I never regret the little bad I do. hahaha, and I'm not even joshing!) good luck with this gem. LUv, Andrea

WeLL I HOPE YOU TWO MAKE AMENDS, KEEP IT COOL *LUV- S.K.A.T.