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The time is close- the crossroad to my death- dear God, so short the time to quantify, before I leave this world with my last breath, the good my journey brought to fortify a life worth-lived, and aptly justify I've loved and helped my family and friends, and when I've wronged, did offer my amends; as best I could- I followed your commands. Oh, God, if not, please now my soul, do cleanse, and carry it to Heaven in your hands. April 30, 2021 ~1st Place~ Contest: All Yours (Jun 17) Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: 06/1/2021 ~10th Place~ Premiere Contest: Our Last Thoughts Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker Judged: 05/01/2021 Dizain Rhyme Scheme: a. b. a. b. b. c. c. d. c. d.

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Date: 5/2/2021 3:12:00 PM
Spot on! Awesome poem! Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 5/2/2021 9:44:00 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win. I really like your prayer asking God to "cleanse" what we cannot. Blessings to you.
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Date: 5/1/2021 6:47:00 AM
Thank you for taking part in this contest, Sandra. Congrats on your win and look forward to your participation in the next contest, ‘EMBRACE & RELEASE’. God bless!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/1/2021 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, Unseeking Seeker, for your thought-provoking great contest and my nice placement! Hopefully, "Embrace & Release" will stir my muse! Sandra

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