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Last Star's Quiet Wish

Written: December 19, 2025, for contest: Sponsored by: Hilo Poet ****************** The mist paints a nascent landscape tonight, I stand aboard, ready for yet another flight. Today, as the sun wades to its final breath, I watch the year exhaling up to its death. I recall the tears and laughter on the way, The memories drift somewhere farther away. I remember the light, I remember the starkness, And the days I was left alone in the darkness. I have found my freedom, my wings are free, Yet I feel uncertain, lonesome still to be. As mist departs and clears my view, I wish upon the last star true. For a less chaotic world, that is my dream. A wandering brook whispers gently, stream. A hearty ovation for a task well done. A year ahead, full of options, not guns. I welcome dawn’s first tender hue, A year reborn, with hope to renew, A brighter path for me and you to pursue. This twenty-six may have an unbiased worldview.
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 6:23 PM
your poem was filled with warmth and gratitude for the year soon to be passed. Your expression of hope warm my heart. Wishing you the best in the coming year, Texas hugs, Sara
Kendrick Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 10:31 AM
Yes, soon we will have spread before us the chance to live for another year and it is our choice as to how to spend that whether for good or bad. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Boles Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 3:14 AM
A vivid recollection of the pages now faded, some sweet some sad, and yet resilience and trust in what lies ahead await a soothing sunrise. Awesome!...ab
Buhagiar Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 2:05 AM
May we have a happy 2026 full of joy and health. Your poem is truly a great greeting card.
Rolland Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 3:49 PM
so nice to read, best wishes poet
Hind Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 1:27 PM
Very nice ending- with a beautiful poem
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 1:12 PM
Aloha Hilo Poet, Thji9s is a lovely to wish upon a star. i do that. I wish upon a star for 20 2026 to be a good year for everyone. Happy New Year, Mhalo Darlene
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