Last Sigh

I built a nubile nest for them so we could live together 
kept it warm in the long winter time of frost and freeze
no speeding storm of strife could ever sweep it away
where I held them secured within my enwrapping wings.

They grew up nurtured in the cradle of love and care
learned how to build and face life in their chosen way
as a parent the process with them I could affably share
the ephemeral delight lasted till they chose to fly away.

In the flood of the surging river of drowning sadness
I felt the load of loneliness sink deep within my essence 
as from the eroded bank of yearning they disappeared
and I heard the distant bell of destiny toll faintly for me.

As the flow of time searched for a course to the eternity
in twilight’s fading gleam I breathed the air of desolation
I heard it whisper the swan song to me on the passing
resonating in my soul with the rhythm of my last sigh.

August 27, 2021
Title Chosen : Last Sigh
Contest : This Or That, Vol 6
Sponsor : Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 9/11/2021 9:53:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. A creative yet very sad story/write. Have a blessed day/weekend..................
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Date: 9/8/2021 3:34:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this spectacular write, Subimal!:-) Your poetry is always top-notch!
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Date: 9/8/2021 10:08:00 AM
Congrats on your top win!! Such a sad poem!! Heartbreaking!!
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