Last Rose of Fall

In my row of bushes remains one rose
not wilted yet nearby the garden bed -
Last rose of fall in beautiful repose.

Roses tend to perish when chill wind blows.
Her sister roses vanished in her stead.
In my row of bushes remains one rose.

Her ruby petals still unfurled she shows
although long days of cozy warmth have fled.
Last rose of fall in beautiful repose!

Although each fall day swiftly comes and goes
and soon to winter Autumn shall be wed,
in my row of bushes remains one rose.

It rains a bit. Sometimes it even snows.
It seems as if this flower has no dread -
last rose of fall in beautiful repose.

It won’t be long now as the coldness grows
all blossoms everywhere here will be dead.
In my row of bushes remains one rose -
Last rose of fall in beautiful repose.

Nov. 16, 2022
For the Third-Person Villanelle Poetry Contest of L MILTON HANKINS
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Gauthier Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 6:29 PM
Ah! I found it and so glad I did ~ absolutely beautiful, Andrea!
May Avatar
November 19, 2022 at 1:23 PM
A resilient rose, Wonderful write Andrea, Hugs
Walker Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 7:22 AM
Lovely Villanelle. The one thing I miss from Texas, the rose bushes blooming throughout the year. Nothing more beautiful than a rose in newly fallen snow.
Mohn Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 9:46 AM
lovely Villanelle Andrea...hope you are doing well :)
Kaufman Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 7:46 AM
Dear Andrea, This is such a sweet one. I think you are that last rose of fall aren't you? Your words are so touching. Nancy
Lawless Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 3:24 AM
..."and soon to winter Autumn shall be wed"...damn that's good Andrea. Well done!!!
Messina Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 2:52 AM
Beautiful, Andrea. I had a rose bush a few years ago where I last resided, it was small and it kind of looked like a Charlie Brown Xmas lol) One year it only grew 1 or 2 roses...thanks for reminding me of it! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 2:08 AM
Poor last rose doomed to die. But Spring will come again. Best for a win. Hugs.
Hawley Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 4:54 PM
This is a poetry style I am trying to learn. I haven't YET got through writing my first attempt at this style of poetry. Cheers!
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 6:39 PM
Starting out is tricky but in time it will almost be a breeze. Keep it up and good luck
Baker Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 3:17 PM
Nice work, Andrea. A good entry for the contest my friend. Good luck! Bill
Kendrick Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 2:17 PM
It is amazing how one can survive like that to delight us just a few more days. I enjoyed reading this one today. They are not so easy to write but you have done a good job for the contest. Way to go. Reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for sharing and for your visit to my page. Sara
Pandit Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 2:03 PM
Beautiful poetry, Andrea. I love the image of: Last rose of fall in beautiful repose--- and the tenor of that line.
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