Last Place

The last place Rushing river runs by One step beyond and the river takes my soul One step beyond and the river takes my soul All my heart swallowed by the water surrounding me Tears weep like the running river Dragging my heart beneath the rocks beating me One step beyond and the river takes my soul One step beyond and the river takes my soul

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/8/2023 4:45:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.