Last Note

our joyful duet harmony turns to discord you leave in silence Written on 2/8/2019

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Date: 2/12/2019 4:54:00 PM

Sad. I hope just a Senryu and not life. Very creative use of the form. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Date: 2/10/2019 11:10:00 AM

allow me to think that silence is simply a break from the heat... wonderfully depicted, laura...huggs

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/10/2019 2:25:00 PM

Thanks for visiting, Nette! We’re finally getting rain here in dry California! So glad..!

Date: 2/9/2019 7:58:00 AM

Sometimes it is best to say nothing.

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/9/2019 11:50:00 AM

Thanks for commenting, Tom. :)

Date: 2/9/2019 7:58:00 AM

I hope it’s not metaphorical. This place would be diminished without you. Thanks for your visit. Sorry for delayed response.

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/9/2019 11:50:00 AM

This is just in my head, Richard...no worries! :)

Date: 2/9/2019 5:57:00 AM

such a sad goodbye...

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/9/2019 11:49:00 AM

Thanks for commenting, Silent! :)