Last Note

our joyful duet
              harmony turns to discord
                         you leave in silence 







Written on 2/8/2019

conflictfarewellsenryu

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Sara Kendrick

February 12, 2019 at 4:54 PM

Sad. I hope just a Senryu and not life. Very creative use of the form. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Nette Onclaud

February 10, 2019 at 11:10 AM

allow me to think that silence is simply a break from the heat... wonderfully depicted, laura...huggs

Laura Leiser

February 10, 2019 at 2:25 PM

Thanks for visiting, Nette! We’re finally getting rain here in dry California! So glad..!

Tom Cunningham

February 9, 2019 at 7:58 AM

Sometimes it is best to say nothing.

Laura Leiser

February 9, 2019 at 11:50 AM

Thanks for commenting, Tom. :)

Richard Lamoureux

February 9, 2019 at 7:58 AM

I hope it’s not metaphorical. This place would be diminished without you. Thanks for your visit. Sorry for delayed response.

Laura Leiser

February 9, 2019 at 11:50 AM

This is just in my head, Richard...no worries! :)

Silent One

February 9, 2019 at 5:57 AM

such a sad goodbye...

Laura Leiser

February 9, 2019 at 11:49 AM

Thanks for commenting, Silent! :)

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