Last Night, It Rained

It rained, last night 
By placing her head
On the lap of whirlwind 
The rain fell... last night 

The rain of Rainy season is funny 
It never intimates you
By thunder or storm
Anytime, sudden rain

Last night, the rain has come
In light feet, in sleepless darkness 
Last night, the rain has come
With the light breeze,
At your doorstep 

Heard that...
Whenever rain comes love follows
And so, she has stopped coming to me
Don't know why...
The rain still keeps coming...

Ahh! Forgot to tell you, honey
Last night, the rain has come 
Accompanied by the magical moon
For a rendezvous with the dawn
Last night... it rained

30.07.2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/31/2017 3:17:00 PM
The tense in your title and last line is wrong. "Last night it rained" is the only way to express it. "It has rained" would need a longer time than just the previous night.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 7/31/2017 9:03:00 PM
Thank you, Julia. I would do the required corrections. Thanks for the read and suggestion. Warm regards, Bobby
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