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Last Night, It Rained

It rained, last night By placing her head On the lap of whirlwind The rain fell... last night The rain of Rainy season is funny It never intimates you By thunder or storm Anytime, sudden rain Last night, the rain has come In light feet, in sleepless darkness Last night, the rain has come With the light breeze, At your doorstep Heard that... Whenever rain comes love follows And so, she has stopped coming to me Don't know why... The rain still keeps coming... Ahh! Forgot to tell you, honey Last night, the rain has come Accompanied by the magical moon For a rendezvous with the dawn Last night... it rained 30.07.2017

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Julia Ward

Date: 7/31/2017 3:17:00 PM

The tense in your title and last line is wrong. "Last night it rained" is the only way to express it. "It has rained" would need a longer time than just the previous night.

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 7/31/2017 9:03:00 PM

Thank you, Julia. I would do the required corrections. Thanks for the read and suggestion. Warm regards, Bobby