Last Night I Got Robbed

Last night I went trick-or-treating
And I got lots and lots of candy,
Today to my surprise my bag was
empty and it had a little note.
I took and ate all your candy.You
can't tell a soul especially mom and
dad.
So I did the only logical thing, I told
Linda Lou ,that my darling big brother
, is still afraid of the dark and still 
sleeps with mom and dad.

I left him a note with the exciting
news:
It told him what  I had done And
next I wrote
Happy Halloween big bro ……….
your darling little sis.


Contest:If I Were Your Brother
Sponsor: Bobby May
10/15/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Messina Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 6:22 AM
You little tattle-taler (lol) love this cute poem Alexis. Congratulations on your placement. Hugs Charlie
Wolf Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 2:50 PM
You darling little sister, you. LOL. Alexis, congrats on your win in the contest with this great write about a sister bamboozling her brother! Smiles, Gershon
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October 30, 2019 at 9:45 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, in this fun contest, Alexis :) - I enjoy reading your story :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement this was so well done my sweet friend
Y. Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 9:39 AM
Hi Bobby, Thank you so much. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a fantastic day my friend:-) Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 9:02 PM
haha. I LOVE how you got revenge!!
Proxenos Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 11:50 PM
Hi Alexis, the mischievous behaviour of an older brother never fails when a young sister is around, and yet they can also be very protective - very endearing cute poem - best of luck in the contest - i'm sure that you taught him a lesson if Linda Lou could tell! Hug and blessings, my friend, Jenny.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Revenge was sweet. I guess you got your Halloween treat. This is cute, good luck in the contest.
Romios Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 6:04 PM
What a wonderful poem Alexis! Best wishes to you, Panagiota xx
Warrior Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 12:13 PM
Call the swat team...you got robbed...lovely verse Alexis...^WW^ :o)
Mcintosh Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 9:59 AM
LOL... Nice. All my best for the contest. Happy writing and love to you, Gina
Green Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 9:08 AM
That'll teach him. : ) Nicely done Alexis. I could see this play out. Best wishes in the contest
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