Last Night I Got Robbed

Last night I went trick-or-treating
And I got lots and lots of candy,
Today to my surprise my bag was
empty and it had a little note.
I took and ate all your candy.You
can't tell a soul especially mom and
dad.
So I did the only logical thing, I told
Linda Lou ,that my darling big brother
, is still afraid of the dark and still 
sleeps with mom and dad.

I left him a note with the exciting
news:
It told him what  I had done And
next I wrote
Happy Halloween big bro ……….
your darling little sis.


Contest:If I Were Your Brother
Sponsor: Bobby May
10/15/19

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/1/2019 6:22:00 AM
You little tattle-taler (lol) love this cute poem Alexis. Congratulations on your placement. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 10/30/2019 2:50:00 PM
You darling little sister, you. LOL. Alexis, congrats on your win in the contest with this great write about a sister bamboozling her brother! Smiles, Gershon
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Date: 10/30/2019 9:45:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, in this fun contest, Alexis :) - I enjoy reading your story :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2019 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement this was so well done my sweet friend
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Date: 10/30/2019 9:39:00 AM
Hi Bobby, Thank you so much. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a fantastic day my friend:-) Alexis
Date: 10/17/2019 9:02:00 PM
haha. I LOVE how you got revenge!!
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Date: 10/16/2019 11:50:00 PM
Hi Alexis, the mischievous behaviour of an older brother never fails when a young sister is around, and yet they can also be very protective - very endearing cute poem - best of luck in the contest - i'm sure that you taught him a lesson if Linda Lou could tell! Hug and blessings, my friend, Jenny.
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Date: 10/16/2019 8:00:00 AM
Revenge was sweet. I guess you got your Halloween treat. This is cute, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/15/2019 6:04:00 PM
What a wonderful poem Alexis! Best wishes to you, Panagiota xx
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Date: 10/15/2019 12:13:00 PM
Call the swat team...you got robbed...lovely verse Alexis...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 10/15/2019 9:59:00 AM
LOL... Nice. All my best for the contest. Happy writing and love to you, Gina
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Date: 10/15/2019 9:08:00 AM
That'll teach him. : ) Nicely done Alexis. I could see this play out. Best wishes in the contest
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