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''Last Night I Dreamt''


Last night I dreamt -

The leaves on the long winding road crunched,
      And in a black car I rode weeping,
And when it reached its final destination,
            I was standing with a single red rose.

And again and again -

I meander up a labyrinth road into the hush,
      Drooping trees creak and groan sadly;
And birds chirp beneath an inky purple sky,
            A cold north wind is blowing and howling.

So beautiful and lonely is this place of tears,
      But I wish to run far away from this dream;
Still, a deep peacefulness wraps around me,
            This place is etched into my mind.

Row on row, headstones old and crumbling,
      Inscriptions unreadable, others new;
I admire beautiful moss draped angel statues,
             In the maze- the one I seek beckons.

Deep engraved names that I know well,
      My beloved rest beneath my feet in peace;
And I drift this sad misty place, a dreamer,
           Floating with my long gone memories.

I have stepped into a dream of grieving,
      And I read words engraved in cold stone;
Engraved forever and for all eternity, beloved,
            This is where I find you- only in dreams

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May 7, 2016

Poetry/Verse/"Last Night I Dreamt"
Copyright Protected, ID 16-787-353-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, Dreams
sponsor, Royal Ninja

Third Place
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Chansarkar Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 12:33 PM
Dripping with pain and emotion,congrats on this piece ,Broken!
Smith Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 11:57 AM
A lot of emotions at play, congratulations BW...
Misra Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:10 AM
Congrats on your fine win, Broken Wings. Fully agree with Dineen. ~karam~
Williams Gault Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 7:26 AM
As sad as this dream is, you colored it with beauty. Congratulations!
A  Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Broken, congratulations on your wonderful dreamin'' win. LUV **SKAT**
Ninja Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Broken, thank you for entering my contest. ROYAL
Salehi Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:57 AM
Very beautiful...
Makama Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 1:09 PM
Absolutely brilliant and beautiful. A great 7 for me friend.
Andresen Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 4:05 AM
- Oh, a sad and deeply moving dream B.W. - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 3:48 AM
Heart touching:) I traveled along with you into that "place of tears".
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