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Last Night I Dreamt

Last night I dreamt I wore a crown
The world and all within was mine
I held in hand the power to be
The best of all was meant for me

Last night I dreamt I wore a crown
Allegiance to none  other did I owe
I was an Island self-contained
Today I see in me, the clown
~*~
7/28/13
Category:  "Serious"....For "Last Night I Dreamt" Contest

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Alozor Michael Ikechukwu

Date: 8/20/2013 11:29:00 AM

Excellent. This is just poetry and what it is suppose to be.

Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/6/2013 5:26:00 AM

Wow the rhyme rhythm and flow excellent, just rolled effortfully , you write great entries for these contest, good luck, i enjoyed the read, blessings sueellen,

Jack Horne

Date: 8/2/2013 12:57:00 AM

love this and the last line is awesome. Hope you're both having a great week x

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 7/30/2013 9:38:00 PM

Wonderful poem. I love the meter and the message.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/30/2013 11:46:00 AM

ohh, anne.. this one brings the house dowm , what with your deep insight and flwoing words... your last lines too aturn which made this piece a most meaningful one... amazed!..:) huggs

Sean L Sanders

Date: 7/29/2013 2:47:00 PM

This has a quiet flow to it, I like it, as you already know you are my favorite poet. I'm moved by your conversation when you speak in your poetry. You are wonderful and I love reading your poetry, you and a very few other poets surprise with your voice. I'm always litsenning.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/29/2013 9:38:00 AM

This is very nice. I like it. There is a Spanish song, with that name. Last Night I Dramt. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.... Lucilla