Last Night

Should i stand or i should fall?
i have been capped by one so dear
south turned i what for?
the moonlight play is done
who will dance tonight? 
oh you will do just fine with those tiny legs of yours
they look like grandpa's walking stick
laughs more laughs,even more
they are hot legs!
if you don't like 'em mother does
oh how my head aches
so much play, talk, and hate
food is ready 
that i will do in the morrow
to my bed bamboo or water care i not
buckets strikes,voice pitched
cock crows. wake up!
as i was thinking-saying
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Onalaja Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 6:35 AM
hey this is simply out of this world. very good a write. keep it on.
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 2:30 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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August 4, 2009 at 1:02 PM
Congrats Daniel on "Last Night" being featured. Vince
Jordan Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 8:27 PM
Daniel - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
Brown Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 4:15 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being selected to be featured this week . Love, Carol
Pickett Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 1:15 PM
congrats on your feature write friend........:JP]
Christian Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 9:23 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
Fraser Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 4:36 AM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
Shahwan Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 6:31 AM
Beautiful... create your first album. All the best.
Orozco Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 12:26 PM
Thank you, truly I tell you bleeseth are you my friend! - eduardo jeremiah orozco
Devonshire Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 9:55 AM
Very intriguing, Daniel! Nice work. Love, Carolyn
Orozco Avatar
May 2, 2009 at 7:50 AM
Good write, tribute to your party eh? Welcome to the soup! Please keep sharing. - darkpoet
Nutter Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 2:53 AM
Very well written nice poem.
Shahwan Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 10:54 AM
Beautiful.
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