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Last Moments Of Grace

hospital gown sealed nightfall and twilight gloaming black and white stark tiles *** a giant snowflake falls to the ground a cadence of silent whispers surround a dying rose a heartbeat, confounds* a giant snowflake falls to the ground a dying rose a heartbeat, confounds* a flower goes to heaven a soul abounds* a giant snowflake falls to the ground a cadence of silent whispers surround *** Sundown fantasies dipped in the artistry of a diamond jubilee centennial moments of living, death is at her door, she cries to Rumi stars as she wraps her skin with light and sinks, within. Haiku/Triolet/Sijo

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Joseph May

Date: 1/16/2024 5:42:00 PM

"Sundown fantasies dipped in the artistry of a diamond jubilee" This triple form was well done Vie, enjoyed

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/16/2024 6:02:00 PM

Thank you Joseph, I'm glad you enjoyed it, have a good evening

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/29/2023 4:00:00 AM

Lovely mood peace...one can hear the silence, and feel the longing for spiritual oneness. A warmth of purity evasively sought. Anyway, that's how I relate. Another beautiful, captivating read.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/29/2023 5:11:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by dear Joe, I love how you dip in a poem and read it with such clarity, have a blessed day dear friend :)

Silent One

Date: 12/28/2023 4:58:00 AM

great use of three forms once again... the haiku is great and the triolet flows so well.. I have sent you a soupmail..

Silent One
Date: 12/28/2023 11:42:00 PM

Yes it is fine now

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/28/2023 6:31:00 PM

I believe I fixed it, hope its right this time

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/28/2023 12:52:00 PM

lol, I`m trying to learn many forms, but some don`t come easy my friend