Last Moments Of Grace


hospital gown sealed nightfall and twilight gloaming black and white stark tiles *** a giant snowflake falls to the ground a cadence of silent whispers surround a dying rose a heartbeat, confounds* a giant snowflake falls to the ground a dying rose a heartbeat, confounds* a flower goes to heaven a soul abounds* a giant snowflake falls to the ground a cadence of silent whispers surround *** Sundown fantasies dipped in the artistry of a diamond jubilee centennial moments of living, death is at her door, she cries to Rumi stars as she wraps her skin with light and sinks, within. Haiku/Triolet/Sijo
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May Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 5:42 PM
"Sundown fantasies dipped in the artistry of a diamond jubilee" This triple form was well done Vie, enjoyed
Rose  Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 6:02 PM
Thank you Joseph, I'm glad you enjoyed it, have a good evening
DiMino Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 4:00 AM
Lovely mood peace...one can hear the silence, and feel the longing for spiritual oneness. A warmth of purity evasively sought. Anyway, that's how I relate. Another beautiful, captivating read.
Rose  Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 5:11 AM
Thanks for stopping by dear Joe, I love how you dip in a poem and read it with such clarity, have a blessed day dear friend :)
One Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 4:58 AM
great use of three forms once again... the haiku is great and the triolet flows so well.. I have sent you a soupmail..
One Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 11:42 PM
Yes it is fine now
Rose  Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 6:31 PM
I believe I fixed it, hope its right this time
Rose  Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 12:52 PM
lol, I`m trying to learn many forms, but some don`t come easy my friend
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