Last Moments in Time

Those times when you were late,
As the seconds ticked by,
I relied on you to save me,
You let me down and
When I looked into your eyes,
I could finally see the pain through your tears.
Don't worry, baby,
It's my time, it's always been my time.
You know it, and I know it.
You can't stop it.
You can't save me.
It doesn't matter if you were late,
Only that you are here with me,
On this day, at this time,
That you came even when others didn't.
I held your hand, looking into your eyes,
As the light disappeared...
In those last moments in time,
I told you I've always loved you with all my heart,
Please don't go, don't leave me.
I can't live without you.
Your last words were...
I'll see you in your dreams.
I love you, see you in the next life.
Then the lights flickered,
Just as the life in your eyes grew dim and 
You were gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 3/26/2024 10:37:00 AM
Hello Shirley Hudson, it has been a long time since i have seen you , my friend. I think just by reading this poem, you lost a loved one. so sorry for your loss. That person will be with you in spirit. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/28/2024 10:48:00 AM
Hello Shirley, When did you write to me? i am sorry i did not answer. We will keep in touch. It is spring now not too cold. Your Friend, Darlene
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Shirley Hudson
Date: 3/27/2024 5:56:00 PM
Hope all is good with you this year. I wrote you but I guess u missed, no worries I knew we would reconnect. Enjoy your day and try to keep...it's a tad bit cold here..hoping to warm up. Your friend, Shirley
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Shirley Hudson
Date: 3/27/2024 5:54:00 PM
Yes grief stays in your heart and soul every day that you are able to breathe. I watched a movie called Contagion about pandemic occurred in 2011 which was 8 yrs before covid...ppl died as did covid. Really sad.
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