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poem submitted to "The Unseen" poetry contest, Sotto Poet, sponsor, September 14, 2026

Last Light of Illumination

the last light  
   slips along the seam  
      where fabric remembers  
         every pull  
            every strain—  

a narrow glint  
   catching  
      the single stitch  
         that kept  
   the whole  
from opening  
   into ruin  

not heroic  
   only persistent  
      a small  
         insistence  
   of thread  
holding  
   what wanted  
      to come apart  

I watch  
   how dusk  
      withdraws  
         from the garment’s edge  
   leaving behind  
a faint  
   amber residue  
      of labor  
         no one noticed  

the stitch  
   is nothing  
      remarkable—  
a mismatched  
   length of cotton  
      pulled through  
         hurriedly  
   years ago  

yet last light  
   pauses  
      on that place  
         as if naming  
   the fracture  
that became  
   the strongest  
      part  

perhaps we are not meant  
   to stay seamless—  
      only  
         luminous  
   where we were  
      once torn  

each mend  
   a narrow window  
      through which  
         something  
            unutterable  
               enters  

I gather  
   no answers  
      only the scattered  
         weather  
   of who I was—  

a thread  
   of silence  
      a little ash  
         of longing  
   a faint  
      afterglow  
         of voices  
I can no longer  
      hold  

yet beyond  
   obvious  
      sorrow  
a sympathetic  
   spirit  
      sways  
         in the fabric—  

not hope  
   exactly  

but ancient  
   instinct  
      of a stitch  
         that has outlived  
            its garment  

and yet  

   keeps binding  
      through  
         darkness  

I woke  
   with dust  
      of old selves  
         still silvering  
            my lungs—  

fine threads  
   where my heart  
      had once  
         fastened  
            its small  
               lantern  

I opened  
   my eyes—  
      nothing  
         miraculous  

only pale  
   machinery  
      of morning  
         turning  

& inside me  
   a thread  
      catching  
         on that same  
            sentence—  

the one  
   that held  
      everything  
         together
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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September 14, 2026 at 8:30 PM
This progression from the particular to the universal and back to the particular is wonderfully written, Sara. Bravo! :) Gershon
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